Keys Lyrics

Kayla813

You told me you loved me
Then you let me go
Said we were gunna have fun
We were gunna give it a go

Then you ran
Gave up on our plan
I'm sorry
I dont understand

What happened to the one I knew?
Loved me for me, didn't care for the zoo
Money won't get you too far
What good is a car

That has no pedals or wheels
Someone that steals
I won't put the keys in someone else's pocket
I know what is real

[Deleted User]

Another cool one, Kayla. I can imagine a melody and meter for this one. The lines I like best are the opening four. Nice work!

You told me you loved me

Then you let me go

Said we were gunna have fun

We were gunna give it a go

Cheers,

Joseph

KatiesPRIDE

I won't put the keys in someone else's pocket

I know what is real

Really like them lines, very philosophical and with real depth x

robcrozier

This one starts strong. And I like how this really sums it up:

Then you ran

Gave up on our plan

I'm sorry

I dont understand 

The end could use a little refining. IMHO