ZEN song by altIIneo
We would humbly welcome your sentiments on our offering. Click the link below;-
https://altiineo.bandcamp.com
once you access the page. Scroll down to more releases (just above - contact/help) near the bottom on the right-hand side.
Once on the new page scroll down to the third row second column, to find ZEN
May your hearts & souls find a note, a vibe or a lyric that makes them skip.
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Direct link: https://altiineo.bandcamp.com/track/zen
Very nice! Polished and professional sound.
First verse gives me an Eleanor Rigby vibe, then it goes off on its own way.
Enjoyed my listen.
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Hi, great way with words - I really like the first verse and the picture that you portray- very sharp and clearly sung.
I'm not so keen on the chorus, too much of a change of a direction for me. Would have liked the song to carry on in line with the first verse as thought that was really good
[Reverend Francis, moves in broken stain- glass windows
with wounded crucifixes & painful silent sermons
“where is your GOD they ask”?, HE’s just testing my faith
turn on the sun so you can see.]
Loved That
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Yes, I hear a McCartney/Beatles influence in places, but I love the way it rocks out too. This incredibly well done. Loving the strings. Yeah, this is a classy track. One very minor crit if you don't mind. I think the cymbals are bit too loud/harsh in places. Otherwise I love this.
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We thank you Chris, IV (for) taking some fragments out of your precious time & opening up your auditory senses II (to) our offering articulated in melodic notes & neo script IV (for) your amusement. We in great measure, without pretension, appreciate your time, your sentiments and your support. Which galvanises the spirit & summons the muses II (to) paint animated pictures on canvas of the mind's eye IV (for) us II (to) admire, be inspired by & loving extract from their impressions.
Once again our thanks II (to) you IV (for) your time.
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KatiesPRIDE,
We express gratitude II (to) you IV (for) unearthing some quiet time II (to) indulge your euphonious perceptions & accepting the invitation II (to) embark on a mind excursion with us II (to) 'ZEN". Your presence & your input was & is invaluable, & opportune. We in partnership with, 'Neo Modern Vibrations' & "The Ministry of The Gift That Keeps on Giving, thank you IV (for) the uncontrived observations. We are inspired & Humbled.
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RainyDayMan,
Much respect & props due IV (for) engaging with our situation & sharing your sentiments & intellect freely. We are enthused & so grateful. In a time-restricted world, you engaging with the mental portraits conceived & presented II (to) us by the muses & respectfully forwarded II (to) you, finds us grateful & appreciative.
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Great work, everyone! Beautiful music, harmonies and lyrics.
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On behalf of my fellow melomaniacs, we thank you IV (for) following your curiosity, lending a willing ear and a gracious heart and time-travelling with us on a journey II (to) 'ZEN'. We hope you were amused and entertained with the sojourn.
Your viewpoint regarding our musical endeavours means so much II (to) all of us, and we cannot thank you enough IV (for) your time, it is really appreciated.
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Excellent tune, Colin, with lots of musical diversity. I enjoyed how the song builds, especially in the latter third. As RDM and Chris mentioned, the Beatles influence on your style works well. Nice work! I enjoyed the listen. 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Much Grace from all @ altIIneo Joseph. Approval especially from your peers, when your labour engenders from the the heart, is humbling and satisfying. We express admiration IV (for) your time and predilections
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