Our secret garden
Hello! Here is my latest song - hope someone likes it!
Our secret garden
Verse
I see the love in your eyes
I feel the pain that you hide
You make me fragile inside
In your arms I feel strong
Your soul is my song
With you I belong
Bridge
You - when rains fall, the wind blows, the storm comes and the tear falls, I’ll be there with you
You - when you wake up, the day goes, the night comes and the love grows - I’ll be there with you
Chorus
I can’t believe every morning I see you
In our garden of love
In our garden of dreams
In our secret garden
I see the roses, blooming out, with me and you, ’til the end
Verse
Like a long distance call
Our love climbs the wall
Against all odds we stand tall
In your heart I got space
A home and a place
I feel the beat in your veins
Bridge
You - when rains fall, the wind blows, the storm comes and the tear falls, I’ll be there with you
You - when you wake up, the day goes, the night comes and the love grows - I’ll be there with you
Chorus
I can’t believe every morning I see you
In our garden of love
In our garden of dreams
In our secret garden
I see the roses, blooming out, with me and you
Forever and ever
In our garden of love
In our garden of dreams
In our secret garden
I see the roses, blooming out, with me and you, ’til the end
Comments
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Well, this someone likes it! What a great song. The arrangement is perfect and the lead vocal is great. The backing vocals come in at just the right time. If you're going to do a ballad then this is the way. I really enjoyed this.😀
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This is really nice .
I particularly like the Bridge. It's probably a pre-chorus since it repeats.
My only suggestion would be in the chorus to swap "Till the End" with "In our secret garden" I think that would sound even better after the pause.
It's a lovely track!
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Wow thank you so much! :)
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Thank you so much for these nice words - it means a lot!
That is a great idea which I actually heard from someone else as well... thanks!
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That's amazing, I off to listen to it again!
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Wow this makes me so glad - thank you!
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Great song. Production is spot on. Lovely guitars and singing
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I agree with all of the other allocades posted. The song is well written and has a good vibe. I enjoyed listening. Thanks for sharing!
I encourage you to give a listen to some of the other songs posted in the forum. @Billy_Lunch_Money, @ChrisPrice, and @pete692 recently posted some cool songs, and @Kayla813 recently posted some very good lyrics.
I'm looking forward to your next song.
Cheers,
Joseph
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Thank you so much Joseph - it means a lot! I will definitely listen to the songs!
Thomas
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