Loving Her is Terminal (new video)

[Deleted User]

Greetings! It's great to be back after the long outage! 😀

I've completed a demo and posted a new video for my new song, "Loving her is Terminal", just in time for Halloween. 🤣 Comments and critiques welcome. 😀

YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9ci9iWAZCU

Soundclick: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14671968

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/icystorm-694668905/loving-her-is-terminal-demo

Loving Her is Terminal
Words and Music: Joseph Spain
Produced by: Joseph Spain
© 2023 Joseph Spain

--Verse 1
In less than a breath
She'll strike with her fangs
Pump her venomous charm into your veins
The princess of the night
Her darkness reigns

--Verse 2
She'll cause trauma with a thought
An aberration nature wrought
No fire in hell creates a wake like hers
Leave her undisturbed

--Pre-Chorus 1
Or you'll bleed out to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If she breathes your scent you're done

--Chorus
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
And you'll die
You will die
 
--Verse 3
With the bat of her eyes
She owns all she sees
She plays to break your heart with pain
The princess of your life
Medusa reigns

--Pre-Chorus 2
If your clock ticks down to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If you taste her kiss you're gone

--Chorus
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
You will die

--Instrumental middle

--Pre-Chorus 3
When your heart bleeds out to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If she steals your soul you're gone

--Outro
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
When the night comes
Don't fall in love with her
It'll be the end of you on Earth
Her charm's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
(you will die)
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
And the night you thought
You fell in love with her
Was the end of your life on Earth
Her spell's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
(you will die)
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
When the night comes
Don't fall in love with her
It'll be the end of you on Earth
Her charm's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die

ChrisPrice

Well, what better way to kick things off again but with a really good song. I like this track a lot..the mix is great..loads of pumping compression (I think!) which works really well here. Great video too. Good vocals, instruments..nothing I can fault at all. Well done.😀

RainyDayMan

Very polished and professional sound. Well done Joseph.

[Deleted User]

@ChrisPrice and @RainyDayMan Many thanks to you both for listening and your positive comments! I look forward to hearing new material from you both soon. 😀

Cheers,

Joseph