Another Blonde Lyrics

Kayla813
Kayla813 United States
When you say what wrong
& you see
It was never you
It was never me

What went wrong
Blame it on

A stupid song
Oh dumb blonde
You're such a stupid song
Yeah you're competition is wrong
Blame it on
A stupid song

I'll write all the words
Black and white on the lines
I said it before I said it again
Why the interference all the time

Oh stupid song
Oh dumb blonde
You're such a stupid song
Yeah you're competition is wrong
Blame it on

A love so strong
Blame it on
Another blonde

Comments

  • This one strikes me not so much as a linear story, but rather as a collection of phrases that collectively tells the story.

    It's another one that seems well suited to a pop style. I'd like to hear it set to music.

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited October 2023

    I don't have alot of time , but thats pretty good . its a tad self defeating

  • As RDM says, a collection of phrases. To be honest I'm not picking up much of a story as it is, but it would indeed be interesting to hear this with music. I can imagine it with just an acoustic guitar or some kind of sparse arrangement. I think the words could perhaps be elaborated on as part of the process.😀

  • [Deleted User]
    edited November 2023

    I was a little behind in reviewing songs after the outage last month. I just read through this one. I really like what you're written, Kayla! The lines I find the most intriguing are:

    I'll write all the words
    Black and white on the lines
    I said it before I said it again
    Why the interference all the time
    

    Like your most recent set of lyrics that you posted earlier, I can also pick up on the meter of this one and imagine a supporting set of chords and a melody. I can envision Joan Jett or Pat Benatar singing lyrics like these in the 80s. I also like the way you sometimes leave "blame it on..." open-ended and subject to the listener's imagination. Some folks need concrete, literal lyrics with specific meanings that tell a full story, whereas others appreciate abstractness, uncertain meanings, and the use of double entendres. I appreciate both styles and enjoyed your style here! I hope we can hear this one set to music! Nice work! 😀

    Cheers,

    Joseph

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