new song w/collaborator...looking for thoughts
this is a song i wrote quite a while ago but could never decide on lyrics. i recently met up with a local singer/songwriter and i composed/played guitar on one of his songs, and he wrote lyrics and sang on the following song of mine.
the lyrics are a bit more positive than what I normally go for, but they match the tone of the song i think. anyway, would love to hear y'all's opinions. thanks!
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Strong opening, very professional sound and the whole mix is top notch.
As you say, the mood of the lyric seems a good match to the music.
The lyric itself seems fine, but fairly typical stuff. There wasn't anything there that really caught my attention.
But overall a really polished sound and very listenable.
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Yeah I think it's a serviceable song but nothing special. We've already released it but I may redo it at some point. It needs some novel element to it to make it stand out. Maybe some different lyrics that are opposite the mood of the song...just something to jar the listener a bit.
Thanks for listening!
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I agree that it sounds nice but could be more "sharp" as you say. We had it mixed remotely so it was difficult going back and forth via email describing the changes we wanted him to make. Next time I may get someone local so I can be in the room while they mix. Thanks for responding!!
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Very strong intro and, right from the off, the production is great. It's what I'd call an album track. There isn't a massive hook here but it is a good song. I'll give it a second listen as I think it could grow on me.😀
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Thanks dude! Totally agree it's an album track. Thanks for listening
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"Its a good song , You would need to hire a professional to SEO your Youtube channel to grow a fan-base .
"People are not song-writers , They either like it or not"
"They know nothing on rules , you can rhyme moon with june"
"It either moves them or not"
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A cool track and a good collaboration, jrandolph. I enjoyed listening. I agree with the comments from Owen and Chris. It's a solid track, with very good vocals, a great mix, and very clear production! Well done, and thanks for sharing! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Thanks Elvis. We're exploring marketing options at the moment. I have a few more releases planned in the next month or so to help get things rolling (hopefully). Thanks again for listening!
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Thanks man! Really appreciate the listen and kind words!
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