My Life Lyrics
Kayla813
United States
I watch you make the same mistakes
I have to laugh and turn the other way
Hey, I said to you today,
I'm here to stay, I'll never sway away
Going forward
Looking back
I have these hypes
That make me want to attack
I fight for my life
I know I'm going to survive
I look back to my past ex 5
Should I call them and let them know I'm alive?
It was me,
Who blocked their numbers
Maybe I should have been
A better lover
I'm divine as f*ck
I know where I get my luck
God and only God above
He is the best at picking my love
I have to laugh and turn the other way
Hey, I said to you today,
I'm here to stay, I'll never sway away
Going forward
Looking back
I have these hypes
That make me want to attack
I fight for my life
I know I'm going to survive
I look back to my past ex 5
Should I call them and let them know I'm alive?
It was me,
Who blocked their numbers
Maybe I should have been
A better lover
I'm divine as f*ck
I know where I get my luck
God and only God above
He is the best at picking my love
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Comments
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This one feels like it starts in one direction, then just keeps curving away somewhere else.
It starts with her in control, and gently amused at her lover. Then there's the need to attack, then the desire to contact the ex makes her seem unsure and insecure, then perhaps guilty with "I should have been a better lover" then finishing with God should pick my love.
It's almost like several different songs rolled into one.
If you want it to have those unfolding layers throughout, then you might consider changing the music too as you go along to keep pace with it. I realise you don't have music at the moment, but something to keep in mind.
It's a wild ride!
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