I Lost You Lyrics

Kayla813

Now I know dreams don't come true
I found that out the day I lost you
Tell me what am I suppose to do?
I dont love anybody but you

I reached for your hand
You said you'd never turn it away
I called you're number
You don't hear anything I say

So so long
How wrong
A love gone
Over and done

How wrong

How wrong

So long

So long

RainyDayMan

Gives me a pop vibe, especially the short lines like "How wrong" etc, and I mean that in a good way.

It's quite short as is. I feel like a third verse would sit nicely after the "So so long" part. Then return to "So so long", making it a chorus, then finish on the "How wrong" etc as you currently have it. Could possibly make that a fade out.

Currently all the lines in v1 rhyme, which made me expect that in V2, but you only have L2 and L4 rhyming there. It's not a big deal, I've seen other songs do just this, but if you were able to rhyme all four lines in V2 I think that might take it up a notch.

I think the lyric is relatable. It's a strong opening line, and really sets the tone for everything that follows.

Nice!