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CorkingCrackBand

A little embarrassed to share this one as it's what happens when I have a spare hour and rummage through my discarded ideas to from a Frankenstein track! This is lazy 101. Worst of all, I subsequently used that distinctive drum loop on a different song! 🤣

https://on.soundcloud.com/yrydW

Lyrics (in totality) - I'm not even sure that's what I am singing!

All rise - I'm gonna save her

All rise - It's just another day

CorkingCrackBand

I'm going to shamelessly bump this naff song seeing as someone buried it with a carpet bomb of songs... 😁

MoraAmaroLaLoba

I really like the backing, it has great strength and all the rising sounds push towards become mixed with heart beat in the ears.. ellipse, spiral, sound tunnel remains in the air... .So, I am a now the elevator carrying your song to the roof. Up up! @CorkingCrackBand

You had to have a lot of fun doing it!!! Voices also made me think of tribal voices...

CorkingCrackBand

Hi @MoraAmaroLaLoba

Ha - I just mentioned tribal voices on your track. 😀

Thanks, it's a daft song - sometimes it's nice just to express nothing.

CCB

RainyDayMan

Not bad for an hour's work! It's fun, I enjoyed my listen

popitup

Kind of a Led Zep Punk Theatre crossover thing then ? You should spend an extra hour taming the lion of the low bass (yes, get out the chair) and crispening the vocal . . . because it does have a lot of good energy about it, just a few presentation bugs I think. The playground keyboard melody interlude around 1:57 seals the deal, listener smiles there, do again for a Coda . . . it's a fun idea worth some more tweaking, that's my vote . . . always an adventure CCB :)

MoraAmaroLaLoba

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/2270#Comment_2270

I believe that there are roads of thought and that, depending on how each one's are, they converge on those of others, in reality it is pure energy, if you think in yellow you will connect with the road of the yellows.... So for a moment we thought in the same color... I think you understand me?

CorkingCrackBand

Hi @RainyDayMan

Thanks, I'm glad you had fun.

Hi @popitup

Thanks for the thoughts. I think it definitely needs more TLC - and some variation. I'll see if I can spare time. I'm aiming for the end of this month to get my album finished so my time is now precious - musically speaking. This was quite literally thrown together from scraps so we'll see.

Hi @MoraAmaroLaLoba

Crystal clear. 😉👍️Thanks. I hope you have a pleasing weekend.

CCB

MoraAmaroLaLoba

"Crystal clear."

Estupendo!! @CorkingCrackBand

Nice weekend!

IronKnee

That's a rockin bass in there..........heavy!!

ChrisPrice

'A carpet bomb of songs' ? Ha..I might pinch that as the title of my next album!! I really like this though I'd agree it needs to tweaking production wise. it's an interesting mix of styles which shouldn't work together but do. Great stuff😀

CorkingCrackBand

Hi @ChrisPrice and @IronKnee

Thanks for listening and your feedback.

CCB