St. Patrick's Mantra Lyrics

Kayla813

I remember when I was enough
I remember when we didn't give a fu

About what anyone said
If they wished us dead
Instead

We rose
With the wings God gave
We didn't land in our grave

Happy St. Patrick's Day

Happy St. Patrick's Day☘️

RainyDayMan

This is pretty short. And honestly it feels all over the place.

I imagine it was written on St Patrick's day, but beyond that, it doesn't seem to have much to do with it. If it's important enough to be the title of the song, then show us in the lyric why it is important.

Figure out first what you want to say. What is the song about?

How do you want to convey that message so a listener understands it?

Right now this feels like it was written for yourself, to capture some feelings that you had. But I don't think it's conveying much to anyone else.