Walk On Fire

IronKnee

Here's one I just recently made a cover of. Let me know what you think. 😎

https://soundcloud.com/ironknee-877134982/2-walk-on-fire_demo?si=ff570c14f05f454e944e849e1b4eb19b&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

“Walk On Fire”

Words & Music By Tom Tognaci

Baby, I’m wanting you

Baby, I’m needing you

Babe, I want your touch

But, maybe, that’s not enough….

…Where does the passion go

When a storm blows out the fire?

Cold rain is all you throw

While I’m burning in desire

Fan the open flames

Stoke the heart’s desire

But, take a walk on me

And you’ll walk on fire

Baby, I’m loving you

Baby, I count on you

Babe, before you give up on me,

I’m hoping you’ll think it through…

…Where does the passion go

When a storm blows out the fire?

Cold rain is all you throw

While I’m burning in desire

Now, do you feel like letting go?

Well, baby, you gotta know

You take a walk on me

You walk on fire

I’m burning in desires flames

While the tempest in you reigns

But, if you’re walking on me

I won’t make it easy

It’s gonna get hot when you walk on fire

bhengen

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/2335/walk-on-fire

I think this is ok. would love to hear the original. another thought, maybe you, @StoneFlowers , @ElvisNash should do a song together, the three vocals would work well together.

MuskieBait44

Very cool. sounds really good, quality is sharp. melody flows well.

nice job.

my 1 crit would be, i'd like the "walk on fire" to hit little harder. its good and i want more.

IronKnee

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17726#Comment_17726

Thanks B... the original can be found on YouTube: Walk on Fire - Burning Passion, Cold Rain | A Love Story in Music

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17728#Comment_17728

Thanks, Muskiebait

jgkojak

I like this style and love the chords in this song - I agree the chorus could hit harder

bhengen

That original is really good. reminds me of simon and garfunkel,. you guys really harmonize well. that was brilliant.

RainyDayMan

All about the sound for me. The lyric is fine, but it's the music that gets me in.

Really enjoyed that! Both versions :)

IronKnee

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17744#Comment_17744

Hi B...Paul did the other instruments, beside my 1+1 guitar and singing. He didn't sing. He remixed everything and made that splendid video. Thanks😎

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17746#Comment_17746

Thanks, Rainy... I appreciate it!

ElvisNash

Kinda sounds like a Van Morrison intro , This is well written , Swings along nicely Tom

Good job man

IronKnee

😀