One Eyed Tractor Pilot: done

https://www.mixcloud.com/ElvisNash/one-eyed-tractor-pilot-done/


[Verse]

 Feeling like a one-eyed tractor pilot

Plowing up fields of empty dreams

 That farm girl broke me Left me dry

 Took the milk Left no cream

 And I’m stuck here My heart a busted wheel

 [Chorus] 

She left me with dirt

 She left me with dust

 Didn’t even sweep

 Didn’t even trust

 All I’ve got now’s this aching blade

 And the only thing on my mind is getting laid

 [Verse 2] 

I drink my coffee black as the night

 Swear at the stars

 They’re too polite

 Her lipstick’s still on my rearview mirror

 But her promises are nowhere near

I’ll mend this heart with rusty steel

 [Bridge] 

The barn doors slam

 The rooster crows

 She took my boots

 She took my soul

 I’m a one-eyed fool with no control

 Just a tractor pilot on a lonely roll

 [Chorus]

 She left me with dirt 

She left me with dust

 Didn’t even sweep

 Didn’t even trust

 All I’ve got now’s this aching blade

 And the only thing on my mind is getting laid

 [Outro] 

The plow keeps turning

 The night stays cold

 Her shadow lingers

 My story’s old

 But tomorrow’s fields might just get made

 And the only thing on my mind... well 

You know I ain’t swayed

Comments

  • @ElvisNash - I really like this version. you are really putting your soul into it. that's what makes your work unique

  • it only took about 45 minutes in studio to sing this , Thanks Bill

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited September 30

    Well Suno is a good tool to see if something is worth recording , You can waste hours on guitar and not sure if it works . Playing into the advice by pros and use it as a tool. kinda like hearing a demo , Then take it to the studio and record it , put your own spin on the song . A decent song dosen't need a full band , Guitar /vocal works

  • MoraAmaroLaLoba
    MoraAmaroLaLoba Madrid (Spain)

    Para mí es una de mis favoritas!!! Wonderful performance!!ª and so sad broken heart story!!!

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited October 2

    its a bit rough , thats my voice kinda craz . Bz Lewis mixed it added some machine harmony

    Trying to save money

    https://www.studio132.com/about.html


    Thanks

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