Know You're Worth Lyrics

I shouldn't
I love you all the time
I couldn't
Forget
The truth
Its the glue
That seals up the loose
Parts
Where's my star?
Had it all
Don't let them tear it apart
I play the cards I see
I see Gods truth
These people seek out greed
What do you need?
That's a strong word
Whatever love
Do you prefer
I still choose you,
No1 gets to dry up the glue
Learn this in grade school
Don't steal, don't hurt
Our love is a gift
Not a curse
Know you're worth
Know youre worth
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I particularly like that opening verse. Got a really strong flow to it.
As a suggestion, I think "loose parts" is a little weaker than the rest, maybe you could try:
That seals the cut, the bruised
Parts
"Know your worth" is a strong phrase, and feels like it's important, given it's the title and outro, but it doesn't seem to be the focus of the lyric. And sometimes that ok, it's the theme without being specifically in the lyric. But repetition often gives emphasis and I wonder if you couldn't repeat those lines somewhere earlier to do that. Also for me at least, I'm not sure how "know your worth" relates to the other lines. Is it about the narrator knowing their own worth? or knowing the worth of the person they're singing to? It wasn't clear to me.
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Your hook is nowhere near in this song , I'm not sure who your talking about , This mysterious person God or yourself . Focus on one topic and stick to it , In your head you know what this songs about , But you have to relate to other people .
I took your hook and wrote to it , Now its leading to your title
https://suno.com/song/9697d613-ed32-44ca-afed-c009692880ff
Which everyone suffers , self confidence
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I'm not sure where God fits in the picture , it's usually one person supporting another . So I left God out of it
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I think I mentioned this 2 times , it is a good book
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Hard work beats talent everyday , You just got to figure it out . it takes about 699 bad ones , then ah ha one good one
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