Lesson Never Learned Lyrics

Kayla813

I see you sit in silence
The confident you cares
Then is poked
By the lies of a beer

I can see the stares
Nothing is quiet as it appears
The rage glares

I'm sorry you had nowhere to go
I'm sorry you had nowhere to turn
This was never a lesson
Anyone should have to learn

This song is to anyone
That has anyone "planting a bomb"
I heard this expression in 2023
They say ppl that are kind
Are not the ones in greed

I'm sorry you had nowhere to go
I'm sorry you had nowhere to turn
This is never a lesson
Anyone should have to learn

Their manipulation tore your dreams apart
This was your dream from the very start
but yes
take the darts,
anyone with a brain and a heart

Can see

You had nowhere to go
You had nowhere to turn
This is never a lesson
Anyone should have to learn

This is never a lesson
Anyone should have to learn

RainyDayMan

I think you have a wonderful chorus there. Feels strong to me. And the title plays to it, so that's a plus.

The verses around it vary in structure a lot - different numbers of lines, and different lengths of say line 1 across different verses. I don't know what style of music you have in mind, some are more flexible than others in that regard. If it was mine, I'd try to even things up.

Also this line "I heard this expression in 2023" feels like it takes you out of the song. It's like you pause a scene on TV and look at the camera and talk to the viewer for a moment before resuming the scene.

BTW, have you tried feeding your lyrics into an AI music generator like Suno or Udio (or others?). I'm sure you'd like to hear your words set to music, and it's free. It could also show you what effect having a more structured lyric can make to the type of music you can achieve.