Gypy's Box V2
Changed the imagery of this, might enter it in a challenge over on muse.
Not sure if I made it graphic enough to get my point across :)
I also corrected a misspelling in the original. had wrote taught when meant taut
Words - Me; Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/QLjVtriREvgZNqyl
[Verse 1]
In a misty forest
Of chromatic greens
A gypsy woman holds
A mystical cube
Lines and circles,
Puzzles to solve,
Price that's paid
Always costly
Ultimate sacrifice
Soul from skin
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From infernal rape
[Verse 2]
Trembling fingers
Rotate dials and levers
Cube turns multicolored
Contorts and transforms
Final pattern locked
The sky shrieks
Hooks and chains fly
Grabs and tears flesh
Can you feel the pain
So much pain
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From infernal rape
[Verse 3]
Skin pulled taut
Suspended by hooks
Writhing in chains
Blood drains slowly
Into pools of sorrow
Shrills of torment
Echo in the chamber
Body and soul breaks
Flesh and bones burst
[Bridge]
Do you ever regret
Your choices made
That cannot change
Time moves forward
[Outro]
A weeping Marian bleeds
Featherless doves cry
Fragmented torn skin
Lies on stained floors
Soul from mind released
Into the mystic cube
Perpetual suffering
Is nevermore
Comments
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@bhengen Good luck trying to make headway with this on Muse Bill. Got the impression if you can't line dance to it, then they're not interested.
If anything, you've overdone the graphics, enough blood an' gore in there to open a butcher's shop.
Let me know how you get on.
P.S. correct the title typo, they're not forgiving like me. Probably spend too much time trying to find out what a Gypy is!
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@sidshovel - that's exactly what I was going for. one of the members said that my imagery on a song that I meant to be nonesense, didn't move it forward. I think this satisfies that.. I realized that after got back, I misspelled Gypsy and it was too late to correct it.. Maybe owen will notice and fix it :)
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