Gypsy's box
Lyrics Me; Music- Suno
https://suno.com/s/D6gW1qTXGSxU9L1T
Suno nailed this first shot, to be honest, ChatGPT created the prompt, I can't take credit for that.
the words are all mine, naturally.
Got this idea from watching the first Hellraiser movie.
Except changed the beginning from the cantina to a forest
[Verse 1]
In a misty forest
Of purpled greens
A gypsy woman holds
A mystical cube
Lines and circles,
Puzzles to solve,
Price that's paid
Always costly
Ultimate sacrifice
Soul from skin
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From eternal anguish
[Verse 2]
Trembling fingers
Rotate dials and levers
Cube turns multicolored
Contorts and transforms
Final pattern locked
The sky shrieks
Hooks and chains fly
Grabs and tears flesh
Can you feel the pain
So much pain
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From eternal anguish
[Bridge]
Skin pulled taught
Agonizing eternal
Do you regret
Choices made
Can Never change
Time moves forward
[Outro]
A weeping marian bleeds
Featherless doves cry
Fragmented torn skin
Lies on stained floors
Soul from mind released
Into the mystic cube
Perpetual suffering
Is nevermore
Comments
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Pretty powerful piece Bill, or should I say overpowering. Suno really captured this! Quite a rollercoaster ride of emotional outburst.
This encapsulates what you were saying a while back about not needing to understand the words to appreciate the song.
Actually enjoyed this one quite a lot, Bill.
Sid
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@sidshovel - Thanks for the comment. welcome to the deep world of progressive / experimental rock. it's about the overall experience. Essentially in the movie the protagonist buys a box thinking he's going to get pleasure and ends up losing his skin. Pleasure and pain are all relative. In the end, sometimes we can't escape the choices we've made and end up in a box.
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this song got buried from chris' barrage of comments :)
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I love it and the melody is lit! But why do I want the vocals to be louder???? I want to be able to blast it on a lower volume.
It seemed like it was holding back. Teasing me with a climax. I'm not sure if I'm explaining it correctly. lol.
Great work and I can't wait to hear more from you. I always get excited when I see your post. :-)
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@TammyB - thanks for the comment. how does this one sound? https://suno.com/s/xZYunz2ericfg56z
the music is not as pronounced, pushing the vocals out.
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The vocals on version 2 are much better but the melody on version 1 is lit!
Especially when he sings:
Will you ever escape
From eternal anguish (the way he holds this note). Wow..
I don't know about anyone else but whenever I hear rock, I want to blast it. :-)
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I'm not familiar with the movie, but that hardly matters, the images you've painted are so vivid!
A heavy rock opera vibe to this one. Suno has done very well with the transitions between the various parts.
And there's progression and an ending to the storyline as well.
Feels very rounded and complete. Not necessarily my thing, but well crafted.
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Sounds like a lovely person Bill , Your above me on lyrics , but Suno does a good job as always
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it. You're not missing much; the movie was horrible. interesting concept. The programming of Suno has gotten a lot better, it won't be long before you really can't tell human vs AI.
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