Original song - The hell below is gone
This is an original song based on a true story. It's my last song until I get the new microphone. I hope you like it.
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/the-hell-below-is-gone
Lyrics:
Yo
I got hell livin' below
They're up all night
Looking to fight
And I aint got no place to go
When will this nightmare end?
I can't take it no more
Yea
Now they're gettin' out
I'm goin' jump and shout
All the hell I've seen
Makes a nice man mean
And once I screamed
When will this nightmare end?
I can't take it no more
When will this nightmare end?
I can't take it no more
Comments
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I like this , Yeah get some gear man , You'll rock and roll
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Nice! Love those bluesy rock riffs, and the changes in guitar style throughout give it nice variation.
The vocal is actually pretty clean in this one.
The title is interesting, as the nightmare doesn't seem to end in the lyric, but it's attention grabbing!
You could add drums and bass to this with software if you were interested, but of course that's extra work! You might prefer to do that with real musicians too.
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@robwills bad neighbors suck. I've rented apartments enough to know. I always choose to live upstairs....as the sh*t always flows downward. Love this tune through and through! Nice guitar work!
Renee 💌
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Renee: Thank you for listening and your empathy. I do have to make a correction though. Sh*t does indeed flow upward! Like noxious smoke, loud talking and shouting. What makes it a hell is when it is non-stop 24/7!
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if you can get a clean guitar take and vocal on your next one , he can help you with drums and bass
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Thank you. This is what I was saying about accessible, professional musicians and producers who can significantly upgrade recorded music. There's also a guy in Massachusetts who is one of the best singers I have ever heard who produces as well. He charges like $200 a song which is a bargain!
On a related note. I heard a recent song and production by the famous producer Mutt Lang. I was expecting something at least pleasant to my ears. It is pure garbage.
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Well I trust Bz Lewis , been working with him for years. Mutt Lange ? Thats odd . I worked with BZ in his studio for 2 years , But I moved , but he still does all my mixing online , though I'm at a different studio . . $75.00 a hour . He knows what his doing.
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Kinda depends how well you get your parts done for an estimate from BZ lewis . You get what you pay for if your lucky
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Nice,Rob! love your guitar riffs in this one and chord changes in-between verses.
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