It's a One Way Ride
Just about the time
my assumptions fell
you found your balance
you were under a spell
Hey, it’s a one way ride
There’s no turnin’ back
no room for your pride
You said you were lonely
looking for a new friend
looks like you’ve recovered
somebody help you mend?
Hey, it’s a one way ride
There’s no turnin’ back
no room for your pride
I guess you’ve realized
A change was necessary
midnight on the water
gives you full sanctuary
now you cruise the territory
you own the wide open road
the horizon welcomes you
you learned the secret code
Hey, it’s a one way ride
There’s no turnin’ back
no room for your pride
there’s no turnin’ back
it’s a one way ride
one way ride
one way ride
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Just about the time
my assumptions fell
What a wonderful start! I love those lines. Get right into the meat of it.
The harmonica works really well with this style of song too.
Great to see you back!
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Thanks RDM - harmonica may be a little weak. Previously I dubbed in the harp hand-held but for some reason Audacity won't allow that extra track now.
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I love everything about the song, it's my kind of piece.
The delivery was perfect.
An absolute diamond in the rough.
Good to have you back.
Look forward to more.
Sid
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Thank you Sid - I very seldom blush LOL
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Very unique I love the minimal guitar base strings style. And in a world of big sound songs, I'm a big fan of just a guy and a guitar...the story line and harp...perfect icing on your believable vocals cake.
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Thanks SF - Had a good time in the song kitchen baking that particular cake.
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Throw a few more in the oven my friend
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Hey RC .
It has that down in the delta feel to it
I really enjoyed this man
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Hi @RCJames nice to meet you. I love the way you stated your piece but didn't bash on your subject. You pretty much accept that she has the free will to do as she pleases and let her go to do so. But making your point clear as to where you stand 'no room for your pride'. And that you're not taking her back. Now, for that listen and according to other comments, it will be a great one....yep! Love how your vocals fit the song and the harp is really cool!
Renee 💌
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Thank you Renee - helluva sharp analysis - surprising how you knew what I didn't know I did LOL
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