Theodora
https://suno.com/song/e304899c-e7ca-4b5f-a3f6-11fe8b48c7fd
this was inspired by listening to "my epitaph" by king crimson, but veered a bit.
supposed to be in 6/8 time, but couldn't get Suno to cooperate...
[Verse 1]
The shadow dancers of moonlight beams
Cast infinite scenes of perpetual dreams
While I weave, my thoughts drift away
Time steals moments, lies and betrays
[Verse 2]
The black swan's a symmetry of desire
An endless dance of passion and fire
A swirling mass of dark and light
A female's will to bend a man's might
[Chorus]
The loom moves like newton's cradle
Rhythmically weaving fabrics of fables
And aspirations for different lives
In vivid imagination dreams thrives
[Verse 3]
A tavern where destinies collide
A collection of fate and chance resides
Where two people meet and love grows
Onward in time on the river's flow
[Verse 4]
From the cocoon butterflies take flight
Sowing the seeds of power and might
A single strike let the dominoes fall
Cascading events to rise above it all
[Chorus]
The loom moves like newton's cradle
Rhythmically weaving fabrics of fables
And aspirations for different lives
In vivid imagination dreams thrives
[Verse 5]
The eagle with heads of two soars
Over dense lands and vast seashores
As seen from the palace so great
once paupers now a heads of state
[Verse 6]
As cancer tears at the body and soul
The ferry comes, we must pay the toll
Different paths at the crossroads
Shedding our flesh, our spirit unloads
[Outro]
The loom moves like newton's cradle
Rhythmically weaving fabrics of fables
Of new dreams now lived through
Where hopes and desires ring true
Comments
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WOW! I don't normally listen to this kind of music, but I liked this, Those lyrics area amazing
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Very good. Love the chorus in particular.
I think you got your 6/8 timing ok.
Good stuff.
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@RainyDayMan thanks for the compliment..means a lot :)
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Brilliant, I loved it. Superb lyrics well crafted indeed, coupled with equally well chosen music to accompany them. Very enjoyable listen, great to hear different styles on the forum. Hope you have some more of this high standard.
P.S. If you are using the free version of Suno, and you want to double your free credits, let me know and I'll tell you how.
Sid
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@sidshovel - thanks Sid..I had fun with this one.. turned out better than I expected :).. I wasn't using the free option, but I may for a while, how do you double the free credits? thanks.
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open two accounts one in google, the other microsoft, If your working on a song and you run out of free credits (50), hit share and copy the link. Open your other account and paste the link in the address bar, press enter. It opens up where you left off, press reuse prompt and it repopulates the create fields with the original input. You can now continue with another 50 credits.
Sid
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Amazing, Bill, truly. Through and through. Who writes such incredible poetry? Only you. And as a side note, love the swan photo you used on SUNO; so dreamy. Saved myself a copy. Is that okay? Thanks.
Renee
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@sidshovel - brilliant! - @HummerWisdom thanks for the kind words, in regards to the photo, suno selects the photo. I usually just go with whatever was selected. it's fine that you have a copy.. :)
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