It Takes A Sense of Humor

For a chuckle! Coming out of the grocery store last week pushing my cart to my car, for some odd reason I found myself half-singing: 'It takes a sense of humor to get through the day'. So a week later, here's the song. Any feedback, suggestions to use in this list song would be helpful.
For a listen to a fresh take ====> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/it-takes-a-sense-of-humor
Write on good peeps,
Renee aka Hummer
IT TAKES A SENSE OF HUMOR
[Chorus]
It takes a sense of humor to get through the day
It takes a sense of humor when your hair’s gon’ gray
It takes a sense of humor what more can you say?
It takes sense of humor livin’ in the USA
[Verse 1]
‘Cuz we go wanna-be dogs an’ wanna-be cats
Wanna be dolls, hey, what’s up with that?
And we got wanna-be gods takin’ over the world
And all I wanna-be is somebody’s girl, and
[Verse 2]
And we got wanna-be stars in every size an’ shape
Elvis is still goin’ strong, Vegas today
And we got wanna-be heroes playin’ video
And all I wanna do is run from this rodeo
[Chorus]
It takes a sense of humor to get through the day
It takes a sense of humor when your hair’s gon’ gray
It takes a sense of humor what more can you say?
It takes sense of humor livin’ in the USA
[Verse 3]
And we got viruses comin’ out ‘a nowhere
The Bird Flu’s takin’ forever to get here
We got drive-through drug stores 24/7
And all I wanna do is get to Heaven
All I wanna do is get to Heaven
[Chorus]
It takes a sense of humor to get through the day
It takes a sense of humor when your hair’s gon’ gray
It takes a sense of humor what more can you say?
It takes sense of humor livin’ in the USA
[Verse 4]
And we got little green men hoverin’ over Jersey
Lord in Heaven, won’t You please show mercy!
‘Cuz the Neocons screamin’ for World War III
Makin’ Israel greater is a catastrophe!
[Verse 5]
Global warming’s turned into a deep-freeze
President’s sendin’ more money overseas
‘Cuz we got wanna-be gods takin’ over the world
And all I wanna-be is somebody’s girl
All I wanna be is somebody’s girl..
[Chorus/Tag]
It takes a sense of humor to get through the day
It takes a sense of humor when your hair’s gon’ gray
It takes a sense of humor what more can you say?
It takes a sense of humor
It takes a sense of humor
It takes a sense of humor livin’ in the USA.
© 2024 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved
Comments
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I enjoyed the listen Renee, there is a lot of truth in this tune if we can't laugh about some of this stuff, we will all go crazy.
No critiques to offer, really enjoyed it
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exactly, without humor all is lost :). great lyrics
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Sense of humour is a life-saver! I think you're right on the mark with this one!
Good lyric, and the music is a good match for it.
You might try using some 7th chords in your chorus, at the end of line 2, and at "humor" in the last line. If this is currently G,C and D then maybe D7 will work? Give it a whirl.
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Thanks so much, guys and @RainyDayMan I will definitely try the D7's as you suggested! And "Give it a Whirl" Did somebody already write that? If not, or even so, sounds the song to me!
Over & Out,
Hummer
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Strong sense of Country Joe again Renee. Tongue-in-cheek protest, love it.
Sid
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@sidshovel Still don't know about Country Joe, but I'll do my best! And yes, I can be a bit cynical at times. But the truth sort 'a does that to a person. And born a rebel, always a rebel! Thanks, Sid for your support!
Renee
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