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Renee: Thank you for listening and your empathy. I do have to make a correction though. Sh*t does indeed flow upward! Like noxious smoke, loud talking and shouting. What makes it a hell is when it is non-stop 24/7!
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I mean no disrespect at all! I'm simply trying to encourage everyone to try to do some original stuff. That's all. If you want to use AI that's fine. It's just that your essence will come out when it's your original input, good or bad. At this ti…
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Wow! This is really good. Near top professional in all respects. I could see this on a major release. It's a lot better than a lot of other new pop stuff.
I take all the above back. I didn't know it was AI generated. It's still really good…
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It's 2:33 long and ends. There was no intention to end the way it did.
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Ireland has a long history of mental illness and one of the highest rates of countries in the world. This song illustrates this and is part of the album "Ireland" which goes into various aspects of Irish history and conditions, such as the war, f…
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It's good a song but I have heard this very similar chord progression somewhere. The Guess Who? The Beatles? Donovan? Some later 60's artist.
The singing is very good. I like more electric music myself. If you added some more instrumentat…
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I took it as friendly criticism. I do in fact believe that for how brief the lyrics are it does indeed give a severe warning. In fact some famous quotes about the dangers of alcohol are shorter yet universal and timeless. For example, "Greatness …
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I agree it needs to …
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Thanks for listening and your thoughts. Maybe I will develop this to tell more of the story, which in my life experience is timeless. Hope for the future? Not in this story. One cold winter's day they were found at the shopping mall only in their…
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I do listen to 2025 bands, some are the classic ones who are still recording, like the Rolling Stones. Some of the stuff is great! Most of it is not, however. Regardless there has been no increases in the sound quality, only in the effects, which…
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Hendrix is timeless and always will be.
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Yes I agree. Hendrix did say rhythm was the most important. In the world of sound though experimentation, even with bad results, can result in something new.
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I'm here, I'm there, I'm everywhere.
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It is in fact a genuine classical arpeggiation. This particular sound comes from the classical era about 1800-1810. The classical guitar was an important instrument in Europe at this time. There's lots of classical guitar music sheet music online…
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This isn't bad at all. It will never be on the radio😉 but there's a lot of people who like authentic folk music. Create an album, put in online, do some free marketing and see where it goes.
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The truth of the matter is no one knows what music will become. Maybe your music with the 60's sound could be what it takes for that sound to come around again. Art and fashion historically have had cyclical properties. The "secret" I believe is …
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You are hearing something I am not. I agree the quality is not good (due to me using a cheap microphone or maybe even using cheap headphones as a microphone!) but it's certainly not a blur to me. In any event I will at sometime in the nearer futu…
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I still hear it the same. It's really good song writing. It reminds me of Gerry and the Pacemakers but at a far lower quality level. If you listen to something like "Girl on A Swing" you can hear just how far away you are. If you try to "tighten …
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I don't like jazz but this is very professional sounding. I picture myself in my dentist's waiting room (he loves jazz and plays in the waiting room) and hearing this come on. It's very pleasant.
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You have a great sense of song writing, probably the best I've heard on this forum, but I think you need to listen to the end result and make everything much more "serious". This song sounds like it's from a bad cocktail lounge. Listen to like Ge…
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I forgot to add that the fact is older age can be the best, most productive and successful time. It's true. History has proven this with some of the most famous artists. At 70 one can be just getting started. Most people at this age still have si…
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I'm not at all saying to go to Nashville; just that success with original music or just being a musician is possible. People get "discovered" online. People sell their music online. Before I was on bandcamp someone wanted to buy an album of my mu…
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I know a musician who went to Nashville, worked at odd jobs for many years but then somehow got noticed by the biggest stars, including the legends. They are not a star themselves now but they work very closely with them. I remember another talen…
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It would still be your song! Lots of major bands are like that and the writer gets all the credit. You don't even need to hire a singer; just find someone who will do it for free. Lots of singer will just to do it for fun or think that it may lea…
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It's a really good song. Did you play all the instruments? Have you ever worked with a singer? I think with a different singer it would be something that could be played on the radio.
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Yes, this is much more listenable to me then the others. Seems like you are listening closely that what you're doing. Maybe try to get rid of that last "hokey" guitar sweeps sound (which has been drastically reduced from the others) and make the …
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Very good! Can you play electric guitar? I would like to hear that. If you don't you should try it because it's very similar to the ukulele and the sounds you'll get will be awesome. Try it, please!
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Thanks! I thought this one was something. It was recorded years ago. My sound has changed over the years; just like a lot of recording artists.
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Thanks for the inspiration. After a little thought, I have realized the park was not overall a happy place. In fact the people who hung out there regularly eventually had bad "outcomes" around the time. Alcohol seemed to be a common denominator. …
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Yes, I can see how this song can be developed by adding some more stories.
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