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Thanks for your Great comment elvis
I was looking for a stronger hook in the song .i'll rewrite it again and keep your toughts in mind .my holiday starts next week then i will continue with the song .
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Thanks for your comments
Rainydayman and elvis nash
I'm sorry for my poor english
It makes me see can.t trust google translate
So it needs some thinkering
Like a chorus on the end
And some corrections
Got a very cash sound to me l love it .
It's on my playlist
And what is a brimstone ?Hi butterfly i think you hit the gong in this forum .whit this strait forward
Telling who you are song .great idea
WelkomAn other great song i've worked whit carrol to he's a great song writer
Done two songs whit him
Scars / and firefly.s
nice workIlke the old style of this song the hocky
Tonk piano sounds great whit it
And lyrics of course great workLiked your dutch elvis ... studeer hitsliedjes, het is college... made me smile
I dont whant to be famous.
I just whant to write a few good songsI'm a bit lost here elvis nashville.
I don't really understand what you try
Say here.Youre songs a great as they are
I like this. and yes it's about killing
Colter wall Kate McCannonHi elvis nash here is rim... a wheel whitout a tire? Lol
Mayby the cliches are the key to your own works. The most people don't think of them as we do . the listeners are people that don't make music .they like things they can sing along…This one is gonna be just me and my git
Bilding a new one at the moment .i give them names .the one i'm bilding now
Will be named traill .it's a D type steelstring from sapeli mahoni and purple wood neck.
I'll compleed and record …Lost and found story line .thanks elvis
You might not understand .you helpt me a lot .to think a diffent way on this song .i made a new story line it go's like
This
took a while but i found something.to give the song a sto…Did you write.. baby you're song
O and thanks for your tip
I'll do some study on country slang
Carroll kiphen .explained me a lot
About it .lefty .boothill .eighthand and so on.i thought colt was a gun
But it also a jo…in Dutch we sometimes have three words for the same thing. I just have to check it with a translator. before I put it on. sorry for that elvis.
it will be fine.eventuallyOke i check it ...ohw it's
Really bad. sorry for this FU.english
It's not what i was trying to tellReWrote this today
Car to old... have to see about the 3e verse not right jet
I think it.s rocking billy stylethat's so elvis .but it's not easy to find something innovative.
or to tell .i always see a song as a story.so it often ends up in the same things.love hate loss murder.the day nothing happened
has not yet been written....lolalmost everything has already been written or sung.
that won't spoil my fun. You can even give a cover your own sound. It's also about who sings it and how. I don't really care about the science behind a hit. Life doesn't have a fixed pattern …Peace a very strong word often been sad never been heardMade my lose my jobI like the story line here .elvis
Like this lina alot...I got a hard hat and Bourbon Googles.great workI'm.dutch but i now the story of doc
He went around doors .they change the law. And he was cought.
Our dutch warehouses in sixteenhunderd where full of spices
(Opuim.and. cocaine) and some stuff
To make the food more tasty.No happy ending elvis. liked two black
Cadillacs .thanks for your comment elvis and andrea i'm gonna rewrite the song
It's more like sketch now .the ruff idea
Of where it has to go.booze and pills
__moonshine from my still?Thanks for the comment.elvisnash. i'm still working on it . it's not carfed in stone.it's one of these songs .that ceeps twisting.
I rewrote it few times.mayby put it aside
For a while.i whant it to have a johnny cash style song. the cho…Still working on it .it can still change
Nothing new under the sun
A smoking trail where i had gone
As i walk my way up to boothill
Everything is stuck and still
Every stone i.ve turned found …Had a look on soundcloud all life stories. i like them All. you got a great vibe love the rawness in your Voice as it is . Great workhi owen
I see that a lot of members of the previous forum are not there .
and that a lot of newsgroups are gone.
is there anything that can be done about it.
maybe look at the old listings and send them a link to let th…hi rainydayman
I enjoyed listening to it. What surprised me is that your voice was very similar to bowie.
but the whole thing could be a bit more exciting. maybe a guitar strumming underneath. about 2/3 in the song to keep it interesting…hi sounds okay. the intro i would let the radio pan from left to right .maybe a slamming door and footsteps in the background . i would speed up the track a bit .or is it supposed to drag?.
all together I think
it will be a good song.nice vibe and guitar works
like the bossa style that gives a nice swing
to it all
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