Plain_Jane

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  • Cool tune! I enjoyed it! Good lyrics and music. Rattlesnake Shack is one place you won't find me hanging out! Sounds a little dangerous lol 😶‍🌫️🤪😵

  • Thanks Icystorm!

  • Thanks Mora!

  • Thanks Gavin! yeah, I do agree with RDM about changing "threats" to "words". I went a little too forceful there lol 😵🤪 I plan on re-recording the vocals anyways. I plan on revising things a bit and moving on to the next project.

  • IcyStorm - I'll let you know when I have my YouTube channel for music ready. The vid I just posted to this site was "unlisted" just to get it out there on this forum. I have a YouTube channel that was a sing-a-long video for a children's book I…

  • Thanks MPDudash! Yeah - just a quick song I wrote to get the creative juices flowing again. I have some songs I started years ago that I need to finish and get recorded. I few that are a lot more serious that the one just posted. Good luck t…

  • Thanks Andrea - glad you liked it. As far as the watch, time, etc...I was just trying to frame the person in the song as someone who chonically shows up late, not at all, etc. -- and "not much of a catch" again , just the overall vibe of the "ch…

  • Thank you IronKnee! Glad you enjoyed it! 😉

  • I have to agree with IronKnee - I hear an Al Stewart sound in your vocals 😉 Definitely an 80s vibe - I miss those days! The theme reminds me of Hall and Oates "Maneater" - you won't make it out alive! I also thought of Chris DeBurgh - "Don't p…

  • Good song! It reminds me of Jimmy Buffett. 😉

  • I like this "tongue-in-cheek" song. Surely there is truth to it though. 😉 I write for fun so I have no idea what some people might experience in trying to follow their dreams. I'm sure it's a dog-eat-dog business. Like Glenn Campbell said i…

  • I really like this song! Especially the lines "shot blanks in anger at seventy ton battleships" and "Jesus was an outlaw spreading kindness". Very creative lyrics. 😉 As far as not being able to sing country pop - I think it's more intersting …

    in Prophet Comment by Plain_Jane June 2023
  • Rockin' it out!! great song! Love the upbeat vibe. I also had to look up the expression "cut of your jib" - - learn something new everyday 😀

  • Thanks for your kind words Icystorm! I will definitely be working on more songs in the near future!

  • Thanks RainyDay Man! I will seriously consider your suggestion of changing "threats" to "words"....kinda tone it down a little 😋 It would give that line some nice alliteration too! "for words that weren't

  • Thanks Chris! It's been fun doing the project all myself and learning as I go. I have limited time so finding musicians to record the parts is not in the near future. Maybe once I retire in a few years. Back in 2001 when I recorded my first C…

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