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Hi @Songbird52
Oh, the sweet melancholy of the blues!
This song embodies the soul of the genre and you’ve encapsulated the essence of a certain painful yearning beautifully.
I think @RainyDayMan suggestion on the lyric is a g… -
Hi @guyetrep
You’ve written a wonderful, beautiful song. A genuinely ’cool’ feel. Kicking back on a beach somewhere early in the evening - incredibly evocative.
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Hi @icystorm
Having listened to all three versions in this thread it’s interesting seeing you incorporate little ideas that help build the piece. It’s also clear how the original demo got so much right from the off. A really cool song d… -
Hi @highvibrational
What a fun song. I love the rhymes/lyrics and you have a very beautiful voice. A really unique listen. Almost psychedelic sounding. I can imagine this on a Jefferson Airplane album. Great work. I enjoyed the drawin… -
Hi @RainyDayMan
Your user name suits the song!
A very melancholy song with a great evocative lyric. I love the simple vocal delivery - a man who’s no energy left. Similarly, the paired back arrangement plays perfectly to the lyric.… -
Hi @samiamiamsam
You’ve created a real world inside this song - a real accomplishment. I love the simple folk chords which have a melody all of their own. They also give the song a great frame to hang on.
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Hi @brucetangmusic
Beautiful guitar playing as has been noted. You captured it incredibly well in recording - it sounds like you’re sat right in front of me. A passionate, soulful voice delivers an evocative lyric with aplomb.
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Hi @OnlyGavin
Ha! I don’t know how you managed to sing with your tongue placed so firmly in your cheek! A great use of humour.
Technically it’s great. A balanced mix, great, fun lyrics and a driving rhythm from the banjo. The break i… -
Hi @StefPo
Wow, what a great song! Your voice is perfect for this folk/shanty style. The guitar is beautiful, both in playing and in recording. I’ve been listening to a lot of Ashley Hutchins recently and this would fit right in on an A… -
Hi @Johnb68
Great song. I loved the paired back use of instruments driven by the piano. It gives the strings real impact when they join in. In the upper register of your voice has a really cool Neil Young quality that’s really interes…
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