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The guitar and vocals are beautiful. I love how the music picks up in the chorus. I don't understand the 'same name' idea. Are you suggesting she has the same name as her guitar and her playing will heal you?
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This is a cool song. I feel like the lyrics have these lines that are meant to go on and then don't. It is very intriguing!
It has your signature style, which is wonderful, but I would like to hear your vocals better! Excellent vibe and sup…
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It is hard to offer suggestions on a personal song, because they have meaning that others can't see/hear.
In this case, feel free to disregard my thoughts.
""Blue lights, blue lights.
It’s not the loss that made you strong:" <…
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TBH, the idea that someone would want to look up someone after a breakup, or knowing their heart isn't in it for the long run isn't understandable. People are weak and sometimes they follow what they want in the moment. This a very real and raw e…
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The music and vocals are lovely. The feelings are super strong and heartfelt. The piano is beautiful.
The lyrics in V1 L1 and L2 are different on YouTube. Not sure which I prefer.
I'm confused in V2. I thought he left her in V1 and …
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I love this song. It feels so easy going, but the situation is a bit more uneasy. Again, your lyrics say so much without overdoing it. The last verse is absolutely brilliant. The guitar is wonderful, and the vocals offer a perfect vibe. I think t…
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This is a powerful song dealing with a tough subject. It's pretty long, but my attention was captured all the way through. Part of me wonders if it would be better from a first person POV.
Some personal thoughts of mine to keep or sweep:
Yeah, I do understand. As I said before, I have lived this song. It felt happy and fun even knowing there were no plans to be forever. The end is very painful.
I think I lived this once and it didn't end well for me.
She sounds happy as does the music. It's fun and enjoyable with a nice country vibe. I hope it works out better for her than for me!
Very nice!
This is very sad but in a lovely way. The images you paint make this feel very real and I easily connect with this character. The only image that strikes me somewhat odd is the paper bags tossing in the wind. Scraps of paper or leaves feel more r…
This really picked up as it goes along. I enjoyed the melodies and vibrant feel. A creative theme with music that fits perfectly. Cool song!
I am in this same position. My son is aching to leave and become independent, but it is scary. Your lyrics capture this very well, and the music and vocals are sublime. I can feel the emotion in your delivery.
To offer some critique,
<…I knew this was going to be witty and fun. I love your humor. It's totally relatable (I think -lol). I always enjoy your creative songs.
Very nice all around. The beautiful guitar and vocals deliver a perfect mood for the lyrics. I like the part about the baby. It elevates the story from another, 'she left me, and I miss her'. I enjoyed the listen very much.
It is so easy to get lost in the music and vocals. The emotion pours out and I feel it in your performance. A wonderful and captivating song. Beautiful!
I think there is something emotionally touching in the lyrics. It sees this guy has lost his love, but is he trying to move on, or does he want to get her back? I think he is trying to prove his love to win her back, which is a great idea.
The music and vocals are so soothing and beautiful. Kind of entrancing, like a firefly. The lyrics tell a less peaceful story which is interesting. Wonderful images to paint this story.
This could have led to a happy ending where the firef…
I really like the whole vibe going on. It almost feels pulsating and alive. I like it!!
A quick thought on V1:
"Early morning angel waiting
Bed of curtains dirty floor
Living off regretful trusting
Purified the dev…
I love the message in your song. It is easy to get sidetracked during the holidays, but remembering the real reason is so important. I love the harmonica solo.
Super catchy and meaningful. Really nice Tom.
I can imagine wanting to leave for another world, and I guess we are all aliens to each other. It's a cool rocker. Love the music and vocals. Had me bopping in my chair. Good stuff!
The vibe of the music and vocals complements the lyrics perfectly. I like the theme. It is very relatable, and the delivery feels spot on. I enjoyed the listen very much.
Oh yeah, I had a thought on this line:
"And they'll never hear her footsteps fall inside their minds" Since you use the word 'fall' in the chorus. Maybe 'Creep inside their minds'? <…
I feel like there is this desperate longing to find one's true love, but then some of the language leads me to believe there already is someone specific he is wanting.
"Can a caged bird sing
Can a wallflower dance
Can stale win…
Wow Joseph, this is really great. I love the theme and the music and melody are excellent.
The idea that this enchantress is powerful, and evil comes through loud and clear. Plenty of imagery for me to picture what is happening as I liste…
Thanks Joseph, @icystorm ! I always appreciate your comments and thoughts. You are very kind :)
Thanks so much for your comments @popitup! I am so thrilled that you were moved by the Storm. Nathan knocked it out of t…
The music is really nice. It feels like a perfect fit for the lyrics. Nice vocals - I can feel the emotions in your voice. The solo is amazing!
A sad, yet relatable song, done very well.
I enjoyed it very much.
I am struggling with the lyrics because they seem so meaningful, but I can quite grasp it. This line is awesome "The promise of the albatross "! I love the visuals and the energy of the music. It feels urgent like a pursuit. Super cool vibe.
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