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Thanks for your time and encouragement Sid! I was quiet unsure about this one but it sounded good in my head while I was out for a walk with the dog. Strange when and where we writers get inspired….
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Ahhh ok I found it myself 😜
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This one is very interesting for me, and I tell you I have found myself back in the old „Lorelei“ stories that are famous here. I even worked at a show at the Lorelei-Open air stage so it brings back good memories.
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Now I really like this one! It’s round, the rhymes are good and the story you tell (hand how you tell it) has a lot of energy and a nice flow. Very good!
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Thank you Sid and Owen for your fb! I really appreciate it!
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Oh no, I am so upset about the closing. Owen you and this place will be missed deeply! Specially since an „outsider“ like me doesn’t know where else to go. Anyways I wish you the best of luck Owen.
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Maybe the „non-connection“ too the soldier is exactly what makes this one special? I mean the lyrics are good and as far as I get it the main topic is love not war, desaster or something like that. I take it as a different kind of rose in the bouque…
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Fb is feedback und nope I have never heared of Virgin olive oil… o,0
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Thanks for the comments and fb guys. As I said in my introduction (ok guess it was in the old forum) I deal with depression, anxiety and all that good stuff and I’m fighting my way through it. This pice here is really me trying to to talk about one …
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Hey Iron, thanks for your time and fb! Sometimes I do write the music too…well at least the chords to my words but only if I have the time and a clear vision for the whole song. I usually write the lyrics with some music in my mind but only if it’s …
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I thank you for your time, fb and ideas gentlemen.
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Heya, I do like it, specially the chorus and the verses get stronger while the song continues. I like that as well. Makes the whole thing more visual. Yeahaaa! 😜
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Thank you B! I really appreciate your fb and yes I let the listener decide
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It’s a good one, and you really did a great job with the surprising twist! I do like that. And I’ve learned something new, never noticed that you spell it Majorca, I had to look it up lol. For us it’s Mallorca.
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Sailor
Wild ocean I feel you inside A‘
Wild ocean storms and waves so high
Filled only with sharks of all kind
And there is no place to hide
Getting seasick while I’m watching
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Ty hummer!
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Thank you guys you are very kind!
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„Umbrella“ ….oh gesh I hate that one too. Still don’t understand the hype they made around it.
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Seems we've become a nation of throw-away hearts
Just a nation of throw-away-hearts
….yes, I like this one and these lines especially.
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Hey,
I do like that piece, gives a good, positive feeling. Relatable and with a good ending.
Just a little thing: I think you can do better with the last line of verse one. To me it could be a little more…there. Stronger words I guess. … -
I agree on Sid’s idea. And btw sometimes you better keep it to yourself instead of spraying it on every wall…
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Nice one where ppl can relate to, especially for the younger ones situation like this often seems like „the end of the world“ and you captured this feeling well.
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Thank you for this good piece of work!
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Sad but nice one. It has a strong emotion. Would love to hear it with music.
I especially like the line: like a king reclaiming his throne.…there is so much anger and pain in this line
Hope I could have been helpful
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I do like this one! It has a nice flow and a good, strong message.
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It’s a nice and „simple“ one, I like it.
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Nice way to „steal“ from yourself with the land of money line…but the whole piece has something. Just an idea I got while reading: why not bring the „true sense“ in? Could be a nice play-around with words and sound. That’s just my brain taking the p…
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Ty guys
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Thanks bhengen. All I know is that I want some old school instruments for this one. Still trying to figure out the final melody.
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Thanks Owen!
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