https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/ Wed, 06 May 2026 22:09:59 +0000 en R&B Soul — The Songwriters Forum https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/679/you-aint-nothin-to-her Sun, 09 Jun 2024 17:53:15 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review JT424 679@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions (Bongos, Echoing guitar)

Verse 1:
You say that you want her
Back in her life
You say you're always lonely
And cryin' every night
Now you know
How she used to feel

She finally had enough
And left without a fight
And now she's with someone
Who always treats her right
Now you know
How heartbreak feels

Chorus:
(Add live drums, pedal steel and crisp Rock guitars)
No way
She'll never go back to you
That's what happens
When you try to tell her what to do
Now you're alone
Take it as a lesson learned
Man, let me tell you
You ain't nothin' to her

Verse 2:
She's not cryin'
She's laughin' all the time
She's not lonely
Someone's holdin' her tight
She found peace
And it's with me

Chorus:

(Guitar solo with pedal steel and bongos)
Now you're alone
Take it as a lesson learned
Man, let me tell you
You ain't nothin' to her

(Gospel vocals)
Ooh, ooh, ooh
Nothin' to her (Repeat)

Now you're alone
Take it as a lesson learned
Man, let me tell you
You ain't nothin' to her

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Two Hearts Beat As One


Verse 1: slow ballad, light R&B/soul production/arrangement, pedal steel and slide guitar)
Girl when I'm with you, I can feel a fire burning inside
From your sweet perfume to that black dress, it all just drives me wild
You're so perfect, it's a mystery to me
That someone like you would love me


Chorus:
When our two hearts beat as one
I can feel your love
Everytime you're here with me
You shine as bright as the sun
I used to feel so alone, so alone
But when our two hearts beat as one
You take hold of my soul


Verse 2:
I'll turn on that song I love, the one I know will get you in the mood
This is a feeling that I don't ever want to lose, oh no
Every time I look in your eyes
I feel like I'm in cloud nine


Chorus:


(Slide guitar solo)


Bridge:
I don't wanna remember who I used to be
'Cause holdin' you now, I see


Chorus:


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Moonshine
Verse 1 (Slow-Tempo, romantic melody;
Mix of Country acoustic guitars and pedal steel with piano and R&B/Soul)
Girl, you know I love the sun, but I want something new
The daytime’s for playing, the night time’s for loving on you
We can order in and pour a glass of wine
The sun’s gone down, the sky’s dark, it’s time

Chorus:
We don’t need to go out, we can stay right here
You know I’d be lost if you weren’t here
Turn off the lights so no one can see us make love
Let’s just stay here tonight and let the moonshine down on us

Verse 2:
When you had a long day and you just wanna let go
Just look at the stars and let them soothe your soul
Don’t let the worries of the world get into our bedroom
Let’s just hold each other and slow dance with the moon

Chorus:

Bridge:
Right here
This is where I always be
Tell me that you still feel the same
After the sun comes up

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