love song — The Songwriters Forum https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/ Wed, 06 May 2026 22:11:19 +0000 en love song — The Songwriters Forum Among Arrows and Hearts https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2438/among-arrows-and-hearts Thu, 05 Mar 2026 17:43:06 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review MoraAmaroLaLoba 2438@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions In a world as chaotic as the one we live in, I wanted to plant a flower. Here it is; perhaps you'll like it. Everything was made by me, including the video, which I also created using my own footage. I think you might enjoy watching it!


Long live Spain!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sJBjtiouuG8


I remember that tree

where our names remain together

surrounded by other names

among arrows and hearts

 

I remember your hand in mine

the two of us strolling silent

knowing that sooner or later

reality would blow so hard

that it would separate our paths

 

We were each other's fruit,

children unveiling dreams,

we were so many things

that it seemed that universe

was too small to keep our kisses



you with your cracked life

and me extinguishing the flames

of the ruins in fire of mine

 

I remember your mouth

despite the time that has passed,

love carved in wood

in a forgotten garden

]]> The Ghost https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2363/the-ghost Fri, 13 Feb 2026 18:53:34 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review MoraAmaroLaLoba 2363@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions Hola, here is my latest song, a very special way to be dead!! Of course, no Sun, just me.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVv1RuYWHJM



 don't know when I died

honestly I didn't notice,

nothing changed inside me.

 

I still see just as badly

I still hear just as well

although I have no appetite

and I can't sleep 

but that was normal for me.

 

I don't know when I died

I still love you the same

Just as well

Just as badly

nothing changed inside me

 

I was your dog

you took me for walks

and showed me off

to your friends

like a trophy

 

I was just a doll on your sofa

an ornament in your living room

 

but you found someone else

she was an influencer

very well-known,

what a show-off

for you. x2

 

And now I'm a ghost

I don't wear a sheet or chains

I'm a love that shipwrecked

in the slipcover of your armchair

 

you can't see me

but I know she can

 

And now I'm a ghost

I don't wear a sheet or chains

I'm a love that shipwrecked

in the slipcover of your armchair

 

]]> In the fire of your embrace https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2280/in-the-fire-of-your-embrace Mon, 05 Jan 2026 11:33:50 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review MoraAmaroLaLoba 2280@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions It snowed here last night, I discovered it this morning when I woke up... It looked like a Christmas card because it wasn't quite dawn yet and the lights gave the landscape and streets a fairytale glow... I live near a lake and a river and it's not common to see snow around here... it was wonderful. Now the sun is stripping the fields of that white color and turning them brown again, like cats at night. And after telling you all this, which you probably don't care about, hahaha, I'll leave you with this song to warm you up.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ITCbln1lZ3U


My love

love me as if we were at war

and tomorrow

would no  longer knock

on our door

 

Love me

like a stranger

free from reproaches

and distance

free frorm the weight of the past


just take me tenderly

like I am a woman who trembles

hidden in her own shade

 

May your breath

be in mine

when I tell you my name

and the warmth

of your body

flows into mine

 

Make me wood that burns

 in the fire of your embrace

 

]]> It's Hot https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1987/its-hot Thu, 31 Jul 2025 18:55:27 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review MoraAmaroLaLoba 1987@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions A different style than I usually have, I hope it surprises you.

https://youtu.be/ovaGdbljjcs


The heat entered the room

without hesitation

leaving me awake

watching your nape

your neck

your shoulder

your body

 

I spy on your breathing

now slow

and I wonder

what your dreams are

when your hand

caresses the pillow.

 

The smell of my sweat

takes me to a past reality

when you and I drank from love and sin

shrouded in the same darkness

that today suffocates

and frightens me.

 

I get up to look at the night

while an elusive moon

hides

putting and removing shadows

on the rooftops and in the corners.

 

It smells of wet earth

but the air doesn't move

 

even the hours do not walk

since the day everything changed

 

how hot it is

]]> Love Me (Happy Valentine's Day!) https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1487/love-me-happy-valentines-day Fri, 14 Feb 2025 14:07:46 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review HummerWisdom 1487@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions Well, you just know I had to take a stab at a Valentine's Day ditty today! 'Cuz I imagine you'll be posting your Valentine's Day songs this day, Valentine's Day! Any suggestions always help!

This one's a tad easier on the ears in my humble opinion =====> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/love-me

Hope you have a lovely one,

Renee 💌

LOVE ME

[Chorus]

Love me

Why won’tcha?

Love me

Why don’tcha?

Love me

Why can’tcha?

Why won’tcha

Why don’tcha

Why can’tcha

Love me?

Love me

 

[Verse 1]

Could it be I act too tough?

You would never be enough?

Could it be I’m insecure?

Could it be I’m just not her?

 

[Chorus]

Love me

Why won’tcha?

Love me

Why don’tcha?

Love me

Why can’tcha?

Why won’tcha

Why don’tcha

Why can’tcha

Love me?

Love me

 

[Verse 2]

Could it be I’m not so rich?

Could it be that I’m a bitch?

Could it be I’m not so pure?

Could it be I’m just not her?

 

[Chorus]

Love me

Why won’tcha?

Love me

Why don’tcha?

Love me

Why can’tcha?

Why won’tcha

Why don’tcha

Why can’tcha

Love me?

Love me

 

[Bridge]

You know that I adore you

I would never ignore you

My heart only beats for you

 

[Chorus]

Love me

Why won’tcha?

Love me

Why don’tcha?

Love me

Why can’tcha?

Why won’tcha

Why don’tcha

Why can’tcha

Love me?

Love me

Love me

Love me

Love me.

 

© 2025 (Valentine’s Day) Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved

 

]]> Carolina https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1209/carolina Thu, 26 Dec 2024 19:26:09 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review Barry 1209@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions Carolina

© 2024 Barry Williams

 

Seems like I've always been a traveler, 

spent most of my life out on the road, 

with the days of my youth unraveled, 

I came back to my sweet mountain home.

 

To Carolina 

your Hollars hills hardwoods and pines

(Carolina)

like an old good friend of mine

Carolina, Carolina, Caroline

 

I wake up to the smell of the jasmine.

I watch as daybreak dances on the dew.

as the hills come alive, I imagine.

it's all God's creatures, saying I love you.

 

To Carolina

Your Hollars hills hardwoods and pines

(Carolina)

Like an old good friend of mine

Carolina, Carolina, Caroline

 

The road was long,

That brought me home.

It's where I'll stay, 

Till they bury my bones.

 

In Carolina

your Hollars hills and pines.

(Carolina)

Like an old good friend of mine.

Carolina 

Carolina, Carolina, Caroline 

 

 The road was long

That brought me home

 It's where I'll stay

(Carolina)

Till they bury my bones 

In Carolina, Carolina, Caroline.

 

 I went searching,

For the end of the rainbow.

Just to find my pot of gold,

was here at home.

In Carolina

Carolina, Carolina,

Caroline

]]> My Sweet Lucy Rose https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1089/my-sweet-lucy-rose Sun, 01 Dec 2024 17:45:54 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review HummerWisdom 1089@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions For any dog-lovers out there! All of my dogs get their very own songs. The pup I had before Lucy Rose was Mizz Jozie. She died this past July at the ripe old age of 16. I was pretty distraught for a time and then I recently adopted a very sweet hound dog, Lucy Rose 🐶

For a listen ===> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/my-sweet-lucy-rose


MY SWEET LUCY ROSE

Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo, Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo, Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo

From the moment I laid eyes on her sad face

I had to take her out ‘a that wretched place

Got her home, took her off ‘a Trazadone

Threw her a big ol’ beefy Jones chew bone


CHORUS

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

Wherever I go that ol’ hound-dog follows

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose


And she’s got a nose like a hound-dog should

Sniffin’ out vermin in the neighborhood

And should you come prowlin’ boy ya’d better beware

Her killer-instincts are beyond compare, yeh


I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

Wherever I go that ol’ hound-dog follows

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose


Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo, Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo

Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo, Woo-hoo-hoo-hoo

 

Now, it’s hard to say just who rescued who

She’s the cherry ‘a top ‘a my sky ‘a blue

And when we go walkin’ down a busy street

I can’t wait to tell everyone that we meet:


I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose

Wherever I go that ol’ hound-dog follows

I love Lucy

Yeah, I love Lucy

I love Lucy, my sweet Lucy Rose!


©️ 2024 Renee La Chapelle — All Rights Reserved


]]> Two Hearts Beat As One https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/505/two-hearts-beat-as-one Sat, 16 Mar 2024 15:24:59 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review JT424 505@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions
Two Hearts Beat As One


Verse 1: slow ballad, light R&B/soul production/arrangement, pedal steel and slide guitar)
Girl when I'm with you, I can feel a fire burning inside
From your sweet perfume to that black dress, it all just drives me wild
You're so perfect, it's a mystery to me
That someone like you would love me


Chorus:
When our two hearts beat as one
I can feel your love
Everytime you're here with me
You shine as bright as the sun
I used to feel so alone, so alone
But when our two hearts beat as one
You take hold of my soul


Verse 2:
I'll turn on that song I love, the one I know will get you in the mood
This is a feeling that I don't ever want to lose, oh no
Every time I look in your eyes
I feel like I'm in cloud nine


Chorus:


(Slide guitar solo)


Bridge:
I don't wanna remember who I used to be
'Cause holdin' you now, I see


Chorus:


(Music fades)]]> When You Cry https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/465/when-you-cry Mon, 04 Mar 2024 06:08:04 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review JT424 465@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions
When You Cry

Verse 1 (Slow, somber piano with strings)
Tears falling, heart breaking by the second
Oh God, tell me how'd it come to this
All the times that she didn't tell me
All the pain that she was keeping in
Now she's lying on the bed
I touched her face and I said:


Chorus (add stadium Rock guitars and drums)
When you cry, when you're scared
When you feel like life just ain't fair
When you cry, I do too
But I'll always be right here for you
When it all becomes too much
I'll love you with my whole life, oh, oh
When you cry


(Piano, strings, stadium Rock guitars and drums)
Verse 2:
She looks at me with watery eyes
And tells me everything about herself
My soul feels just as dark as hers does
'Cause I know that she's going through hell
I said, "I hate to see you looking so hurt
So never forget these words
No, never forget these words..."


Chorus:
(Bombastic guitar solo)


Bridge:
No matter what she's going through
I'll always be by her side


Chorus:

Outro:
Tears falling, heart breaking by the second
Oh God, tell me how'd it come to...this
(music fades)]]> Moonshine https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/435/moonshine Mon, 26 Feb 2024 17:44:14 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review JT424 435@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions
Moonshine
Verse 1 (Slow-Tempo, romantic melody;
Mix of Country acoustic guitars and pedal steel with piano and R&B/Soul)
Girl, you know I love the sun, but I want something new
The daytime’s for playing, the night time’s for loving on you
We can order in and pour a glass of wine
The sun’s gone down, the sky’s dark, it’s time

Chorus:
We don’t need to go out, we can stay right here
You know I’d be lost if you weren’t here
Turn off the lights so no one can see us make love
Let’s just stay here tonight and let the moonshine down on us

Verse 2:
When you had a long day and you just wanna let go
Just look at the stars and let them soothe your soul
Don’t let the worries of the world get into our bedroom
Let’s just hold each other and slow dance with the moon

Chorus:

Bridge:
Right here
This is where I always be
Tell me that you still feel the same
After the sun comes up

Chorus:]]> The Best Thing https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/392/the-best-thing Mon, 22 Jan 2024 23:20:40 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review JT424 392@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions Here is a new song from my new album "Dark, Beautiful World." It's called "The Best Thing."

Verse 1:  (Light, Sweet, Mid-Tempo Country Pop mixed with R&B; keyboard, drum machines)

You know that I love you, but it's something more than just late night kisses

If I didn't have you, just imagine all of the things that I'd be missing

No more laughing at all of my jokes that I know you don't get

No more holding me tight in the middle of the night when I'm feeling worthless 

Don't you know that you're the best thing...


Chorus (Add acoustic and electric guitars, live drums and keyboards overdubbed over each other/wall of sound)

In my life, every day

Everytime you look at me that way

You make me wanna go and buy a ring

Don't you know that you're the best thing

In my life, an angel on Earth

You take away all the pain and hurt

I think about you in every love song I sing

Don't you know you're the best thing 


(in my life life, yeah; my life, yeah)


Verse 2:

You’re just so perfect, even though I know you can’t see

Every time you’re near me, I can feel you breathe

I know you think I’m mental, ‘cause you don’t think you’re special the way I do

But I know what I feel, and what is to see you in a white dress soon

Don’t know you’re the best thing…


Chorus:


Bridge:

So please say that you’ll marry me

‘Cause you’re the best thing in my life 

(in my life life, yeah; my life, yeah)


Chorus:


(Music fades)

]]> Even not forgetting https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/206/even-not-forgetting Fri, 19 May 2023 11:30:49 +0000 Original Songs & Lyrics for review MoraAmaroLaLoba 206@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions

This song is the result of my non-inspiration days!! hahaha OMG!

a heavy fight against myself😎

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8pxGDdU_V8


Wind of time took me off the last leaves of innocence

letting shine

the truth of my blindness

 

that's why

 

Even not forgetting

I forget you


all the doubts that trembled

in my eyes

have now name and shape

 

Even not forgetting

I forget you

doors and windows

are closed to your presence

in my dreams


while I let yesterday's water

dissolve

the one I was

by your side

 

Your today does not exist in mine

I became a blackhole through which you fell

to a silent universe lost in itself

 

No more words to describe your face

your voice

your hands

no more nothing

only my steps walking my way


 

I did not know that to live I had to die so many times

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