Dances For The Moon

Billy_Lunch_Money — Wed, 22 Nov 2023 17:55:06 +0000

Hi Guys, I think this was my first post on the old site. It's not metal! 😂 I thought I'd have a go at the vocals for it. I don't think they are all that good to be frank. But they are a lot better than the original and I wish I had the skill to double track them. It's mostly the lyrics and the arrangement I'm looking at. The production side not so much, as it's all an experiement. But, any advice is good advice and will be much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/billy_lunch_money/dances-for-the-moon

Intro

Oh, she dances for the moon. Hear a whisper in the wind.

Oh, she dances for the moon.

Verse 1

Her eyes just full of stars and barefoot on the hills.

The joy in her face is for her and the moon.

Chorus

Oh, she dances for the moon. Hear a whisper in the wind.

Oh, she dances for the moon. For the moon and no-one else.

Oh, she dances for the moon.

Verse 2

Her mind just full of scars. Her only friend's the moon.

With a dance of ease and grace. Like the flowers in full bloom.

Chorus

Verse 3

She adored from afar, They'll be together soon

As she feels the warm embrace with her love for the moon.

Bridge(Chorus X2)

Outro

I’m the man in the moon!

Folky not my usual metal — The Songwriters Forum

Dances For The Moon