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        <title>#Folk Rock — The Songwriters Forum</title>
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        <pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2026 00:48:29 +0000</pubDate>
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        <title>Fly, Brave Eagle, Fly (UPDATED / iPhone recording)</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2238/fly-brave-eagle-fly-updated-iphone-recording</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2025 20:02:56 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>schmalex</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Here is an iPhone recording of my guitar teacher and I performing an update of my latest song during practice yesterday:</p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/user-547160600/fly-brave-eagle-fly-iphone-recording" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/user-547160600/fly-brave-eagle-fly-iphone-recording</a></p><p><strong>“FLY, BRAVE EAGLE, FLY”</strong></p><p><strong>INTRO / CHORUS 1:</strong></p><p><em>Fly, brave eagle, fly…</em></p><p><em>beyond the mountains,</em></p><p><em>we’ve climbed so high!</em></p><p><em>Soar, brave eagle, soar…</em></p><p><em>‘cross distant valleys</em></p><p><em>and foreign shores!</em></p><p><em>We’ll still be here together,</em></p><p><em>should you grace these lands again.</em></p><p><em>Farewell,</em></p><p><em>we will remember you</em></p><p><em>to the end!</em></p><p><strong>VERSE 1:</strong></p><p><em>And, all our history,</em></p><p><em>you’ve dared us climb,</em></p><p><em>to heights unseen.</em></p><p><em>But we have gone astray,</em></p><p><em>sown death &amp; misery…</em></p><p><em>…the world to pay.</em></p><p><em>It is not your fault.</em></p><p><em>You couldn’t know the cost.</em></p><p><em>Your soul’s too pure to see</em></p><p><em>we prideful men are lost.</em></p><p>Fly, brave eagle…</p><p><strong>CHORUS 2:</strong></p><p><em>fly, brave eagle, fly…</em></p><p><em>beyond the mountains,</em></p><p><em>we’ve climbed so high!</em></p><p><em>Soar, brave eagle, soar…</em></p><p><em>‘cross distant valleys</em></p><p><em>and foreign shores!</em></p><p><em>We’ll still be here together,</em></p><p><em>should you grace these lands again.</em></p><p><em>Farewell,</em></p><p><em>we will remember you</em></p><p><em>to the end!</em></p><p><strong>VERSE 2:</strong></p><p><em>Oh, fly………!</em></p><p><em>Fly………!</em></p><p><em>Fly………!</em></p><p><em>Fly, brave eagle, fly!</em></p><p><em>Fly, brave eagle…</em></p><p><em>Fly………!</em></p><p><em>Oh, brave eagle…</em></p><p><strong>BRIDGE 1:</strong></p><p><em>why did you tempt poor Icarus,</em></p><p><em>just to drown him in the sea?</em></p><p><em>If there’s a limit to these</em></p><p><em>heights we’ll achieve,</em></p><p><em>how do we dare to dream?</em></p><p><strong>CHORUS 3:</strong></p><p><em>Fly, brave eagle, fly…</em></p><p><em>beyond the mountains,</em></p><p><em>we’ve climbed so high!</em></p><p><em>Soar, brave eagle, soar…</em></p><p><em>‘cross distant valleys</em></p><p><em>and foreign shores!</em></p><p><em>We’ll still be here together,</em></p><p><em>should you grace these lands again.</em></p><p><em>Farewell,</em></p><p><em>we will remember you</em></p><p><em>to the end!</em></p><p><strong>BRIDGE 2:</strong></p><p><em>Oh, is this the future brave Prometheus dreamed,</em></p><p><em>chained upon your rock?</em></p><p><em>Can we escape these chains of hate,</em></p><p><em>and fill our hearts with love?</em></p><p><strong>CHORUS 4 / OUTRO:</strong></p><p><em>Fly, brave eagle, fly…</em></p><p><em>beyond the mountains,</em></p><p><em>we’ve climbed so high!</em></p><p><em>Soar, brave eagle, soar…</em></p><p><em>‘cross distant valleys</em></p><p><em>and foreign shores!</em></p><p><em>We’ll still be here together,</em></p><p><em>should you grace these lands again.</em></p><p><em>Farewell,</em></p><p><em>we will remember you</em></p><p><em>to the end!</em></p>]]>
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        <title>Arizona's Not On the Ocean (worktape)</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2063/arizonas-not-on-the-ocean-worktape</link>
        <pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2025 22:18:35 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Arts_Tunes</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>SOUNDCLOUD: <a href="https://on.soundcloud.com/088eVybXbIpj3tyZgm" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://on.soundcloud.com/088eVybXbIpj3tyZgm</a></p><p>I'm hoping a local country band will think one of my songs is good enough to cut. Here's my latest effort. I'm amazed I got this in just one take, after the other 199.</p><p><br /></p><p>The last I checked, Arizona's not on the ocean</p><p>It's 105 and hasn't rained in weeks</p><p>Even cactus pray for a drop of water</p><p>and the fish swim in dust down at the creek</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS</p><p>But it's flooding in this bar here in Tucson</p><p>Waves of beer so high I might drown</p><p>The whiskey current's trying to pull me under</p><p>since you took off with him and left town<em> (still not entirely sold on this line)</em></p><p><br /></p><p>We were running low just before you left me</p><p>You were drinking from the well of another guy</p><p>Then I called and got a disconnected number</p><p>and heard the news you'd left me high and dry</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Now it's flooding in this bar here in Tucson</p><p>Waves of beer so high I might drown</p><p>The whiskey current's trying to pull me under</p><p>since you took off with him and left town <em>(even the 2nd time through I'm still not sold on it !)</em></p><p><br /></p><p>The last I checked, Arizona's not on the ocean</p><p>There's no reason for this rising tide</p><p>The rapids pulling me down to the bottom</p><p>are made of beer and the tears I cry</p>]]>
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        <title>Don't Dream Them Dreams</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/2006/dont-dream-them-dreams</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2025 19:19:44 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Arts_Tunes</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>AUDIO: <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oz3D53eU8EU" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oz3D53eU8EU</a></p><p>Thanks for having me on this forum, RainyDayMan! I used to be here a lot in the months just before COVID. Then my local open mics stopped and my mind wandered to things besides music. But I'm back!</p><p>This song is a true story a friend of mine experienced with his grandad. It's about how self-doubt and fear of failure are passed down generation to generation. NO AI was  used in the creation of this song!</p><p><br /></p><p>VERSE 1</p><p>He showed grandpa his paper</p><p>The best grade in class</p><p>Said, "I think I've found my calling at last</p><p>I'll travel the world</p><p>and be a book writer"</p><p>Grandpa shook his head</p><p>and set down his cider</p><p><br /></p><p>PRECHORUS</p><p>"Grandson of mine,</p><p>you'll only get hurt</p><p>It's the fate of our kind</p><p>to be poor as dirt</p><p>Put this aside</p><p>and learn a trade</p><p>and take to heart</p><p>what I'm going to say</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS</p><p>"Boy, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You know they can't happen to us</p><p>Boy, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You'll see them crushed into dust</p><p>Don't dream them dreams</p><p>Don't dream them dreams"</p><p><br /></p><p>VERSE 2</p><p>When he grew up</p><p>he put his pen away</p><p>Worked to the bone</p><p>and bills to pay</p><p>Stories and plays</p><p>were not his concern</p><p>Just trying to get by</p><p>on what little he earned</p><p>Once and again</p><p>he would write a few lines</p><p>Then say to himself,</p><p>"I just don't have the time"</p><p><br /></p><p>PRECHORUS</p><p>Over and over</p><p>they played in his head</p><p>the words of warning</p><p>his grandpa said</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS</p><p>"Boy, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You know they can't happen to us</p><p>Boy, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You'll see them crushed into dust</p><p>Don't dream them dreams</p><p>Don't dream them dreams"</p><p><br /></p><p>VERSE 3</p><p>He saw his daughter's painting</p><p>the best in the class</p><p>"Dad, I think I've found</p><p>my calling at last</p><p>I'll beautify the world</p><p>through works of art"</p><p>He said the words</p><p>he knew by heart</p><p><br /></p><p>PRECHORUS</p><p>"Daughter of mine,</p><p>you'll only get hurt</p><p>It's the fate of our kind</p><p>to be poor as dirt</p><p>Put these thoughts aside</p><p>and learn a trade</p><p>Now take to heart</p><p>what I'm going to say</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS</p><p>"Girl, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You know they can't happen to us</p><p>Girl, don't dream them dreams</p><p>You'll see them crushed into dust</p><p>Don't dream them dreams</p><p>Don't dream them dreams"</p><p><br /></p><p>© 2025 Art Howard</p>]]>
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        <title>NeverEnding War</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1897/neverending-war</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 28 Jun 2025 17:34:31 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Since war seems to be weighing heavily upon the world's shoulder at this moment in history, thought I'd give it some thought in the way of a song.  Any feedback is welcome.  </p><p>Backing Track provided by JMP Backing Tracks, Youtube</p><p>For a listen ==&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/neverending-war" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/neverending-war</a></p><p>NeverEnding War</p><p>V1</p><p>Who’s calling the shots, it’s hard to tell</p><p>The United States or Israel</p><p>All I know for certain it’s the world they’re hurtin’</p><p>Another Bankster War to sell</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Since I can remember, January through December</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>Cain slewed Abel, everybody knows</p><p>Jacob over Esau, way it goes</p><p>One thing is for certain, who’s behind the curtain</p><p>Always wanted a world their own</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Since I can remember, January through December</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>The Ten Commandments don’t apply</p><p>The Golden Rule is a lie</p><p>Can’t say Jesus didn’t warn us of the storm before us</p><p>All that’s left is an eye for an eye</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Since I can remember, January through December</p><p>It’s never-never-never-ending-war</p><p> </p><p>Never, never-ending war</p><p>Never-ending war</p><p>Since I can remember, January through December</p><p>It’s never-never-ending-war.</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>I Go My Way</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1898/i-go-my-way</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 29 Jun 2025 15:36:47 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Been working on this one a bit here and there since 2024.  Inspired by one of the late Max Ehrmann's lesser known poems:  "I Go My Way".  Max Ehrmann is most famously known for his poem, "Desiderata".</p><p>Any feedback is welcome.  Thank you for taking the time. </p><p>Lovely Backing Track provided by JMP Backing Tracks, Youtube.</p><p>For a listen ==&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/i-go-my-way-revisited" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/i-go-my-way-revisited</a></p><p><br /></p><p>I GO MY WAY</p><p>V1</p><p>Cars go racing by</p><p>A typical work day</p><p>Sad faces scurrying about</p><p>Stacks of bills to pay</p><p>From dawn till dusk</p><p>Travelin’ a lone byway</p><p>Hummin’ a humble tune</p><p>Takes me through my day</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>After I’ve come to say</p><p>What I came to say</p><p>My worn-out welcome</p><p>I don’t overstay</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>Born a castaway</p><p>A castaway I’ll always be</p><p>Wild as the wind blows</p><p>Find me lost at sea</p><p>This world’s glitter and gold</p><p>Mean nothing to me</p><p>Wisdom is my windfall</p><p>Knowledge is the key</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>After I’ve come to say</p><p>What I came to say</p><p>My worn-out welcome</p><p>I don’t overstay</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>And in the calm</p><p>Of a warm afternoon breeze</p><p>I watch branches dancing</p><p>High up in the trees</p><p>Millions of stars</p><p>Will soon be all mine to gaze</p><p>The universe</p><p>Will soon be all mine to praise</p><p> </p><p>Ooooh-ooooh-ooh</p><p>Ooooh-ooooh-ooh</p><p>Ooooh-ooooh-ooh</p><p>Ooooh-ooh</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way</p><p>I go my way</p><p>Quietly I go my way.</p><p> </p><p><em>Inspired by the late poet, Max Ehrmann; one of his lesser known poems, “I Go My Way”.</em></p><p>© 2024-2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Taken Away</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1821/taken-away</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 24 May 2025 16:57:23 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello TSFers!  Sorry, a real tearjerker 😥 today.  But I've been wanting and trying to write something that made sense for my birth-mother for a VERY long time now.  Any feedback is welcome.  Interesting Backing Track by Reinhold Tracks <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ruAZs0ESIgI&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=107" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ruAZs0ESIgI&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=107</a></p><p>===&gt; For a listen <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/taken-away" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/taken-away</a></p><p><br /></p><p>TAKEN AWAY</p><p>V1</p><p>The greatest loss I’ve suffered</p><p>Is the loss of my mother</p><p>It would’ve been easier if she’d passed away</p><p>‘Cuz the state took me and my brother</p><p>As babies from our mother</p><p>And it’s hard finding the right words to say</p><p> </p><p>[Climb]</p><p>Mother fought so hard; she fought so hard to keep us</p><p>It must’ve shattered her heart into a million pieces</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>In a thousand-some places</p><p>In a thousand-some faces</p><p>I searched for someone who remotely looked like me</p><p>By the time I found Mother</p><p>She was six-feet under</p><p>But at least I knew, then and there, she was finally free</p><p> </p><p>[Climb]</p><p>Mother fought so hard; she fought so hard to keep us</p><p>It must’ve shattered her heart into a million pieces</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>Now, in Maplewood Cemetery</p><p>Next to that lovely willow tree</p><p>May you rest in peace, Mother ‘til one day I get there</p><p>And when I see you in Paradise</p><p>No time will we sacrifice</p><p>We’ll have eternity to share and I will forever be:</p><p> </p><p>Taken away, taken away</p><p>Taken away, taken away</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Travesty of Love</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1797/travesty-of-love</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 18 May 2025 14:11:45 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Greetings:  This one sort 'a rocks all be it just 4 chords all the way through. My idea of a love's over song. Backing Track by My Backing Track ==&gt; <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CXxq50Kl1eA&amp;list=PL72IWflLYjn1pXpyMSzeO7zXgM1Owxgr7&amp;index=2" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CXxq50Kl1eA&amp;list=PL72IWflLYjn1pXpyMSzeO7zXgM1Owxgr7&amp;index=2</a></p><p>Any suggestions are welcome.  Thank you for listening.</p><p>TRAVESTY OF LOVE</p><p>Ooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh</p><p>[Intro]</p><p>You told me you were leavin’</p><p>I told you just go</p><p>You told me you don’t love me anymore</p><p>I said, I told you, I told you so</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>But that’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>That’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>And you can’t get enough</p><p>It’s never enough, oooh-oooh-oooh</p><p><br /></p><p>V1</p><p>You make excuses</p><p>I call your bluff</p><p>The lies you tell</p><p>Are never good enough</p><p>You apologize</p><p>Off-the-cuff</p><p>Expecting a truce</p><p>Sex is rough</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>But that’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>That’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>And you can’t get enough</p><p>It’s never, never, never enough, oooh-oooh-oooh</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>Spent all my money</p><p>Took all my time</p><p>Dreams in the gutter</p><p>No small crime</p><p>Pick up the pieces</p><p>Tread a fine line</p><p>The next go around</p><p>Try not to be blind</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>But that’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>That’s love</p><p>The travesty of love</p><p>And you can’t get enough</p><p>It’s never, never, never enough, oooh-oooh-oooh</p><p> </p><p>[Outro]</p><p>You told me you were leavin’</p><p>I told you, told you just go</p><p>You told me you don’t love me anymore</p><p>I said, I told you, I told you so</p><p>I told you so..</p><p> </p><p>Ooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-ooooh</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved 🖖</p><p> </p>]]>
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        <title>ChatGPT Told Me So</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1581/chatgpt-told-me-so</link>
        <pubDate>Fri, 28 Feb 2025 13:54:05 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>No kidding, ChatGPT told me so tho' I heard it second-hand via a video presentation which replayed what ChatGPT had to say about the scam the United States is.  It's hard to remain patriotic when you know your country is out to get you.  I'd like to still say that there's no better place on earth to live, but I can no longer agree with that sentiment. </p><p>On a brighter note, nature, while we still have her is the only escape as America is a beautiful landscape created by God Almighty!   </p><p>Any and all comments are welcome.  But we need not start a war. </p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/chatgpt-told-me-so" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/chatgpt-told-me-so</a></p><p><strong>CHATGPT TOLD ME SO</strong></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>The biggest scam there ever was</p><p>I learned it from ChatGPT</p><p>The United States of America</p><p>A corporation, not a country</p><p>The American Dream </p><p>They needed you to believe it was true</p><p>So, Uncle Sam could easily steal</p><p>Your wealth from you</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>ChatGPT told me so</p><p>ChatGPT told me so, whoa</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>The two-party system by design</p><p>To make you feel you have a choice</p><p>But both sides answer to the same overlords</p><p>And you don’t have a voice</p><p>And the dollar printed from thin air</p><p>Is based on nothing but the belief</p><p>That it won’t ever go to zero</p><p>The FED is one big thief!</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>ChatGPT told me so</p><p>ChatGPT told me so, whoa</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>And the schools don’t teach you how to succeed</p><p>They teach you to be a slave</p><p>By getting a job and buying a house</p><p>Going into debt beyond your grave</p><p>And the Stock Market, she is</p><p>An over-glorified casino</p><p>If the sheeple knew how rigged the system is</p><p>They’d never step foot in Reno</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>ChatGPT told me so</p><p>ChatGPT told me so, whoa</p><p> </p><p>whoa…whoa…whoa…whoa</p><p>whoa…whoa…whoa…whoa</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 4]</p><p>And just like ancient Rome</p><p>Empires rise and fall</p><p>‘Cuz the blood on Lady Liberty’s hands</p><p>Is the crudest blood of all</p><p>‘Cuz under the guise of democracy</p><p>She’s sacrificed many of her own</p><p>Not to mention all the innocents she’s slaughtering still</p><p>Chilling to the bone</p><p> </p><p>ChatGPT told me so</p><p>ChatGPT told me so, whoa</p><p> </p><p>ChatGPT told me so</p><p><em>And my Bible tells me so!</em></p><p> </p><p>Whoa…whoa…whoa…whoa….</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>A Song A Day</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1556/a-song-a-day</link>
        <pubDate>Mon, 24 Feb 2025 14:53:58 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello there!  A recent comment by Elvis on one of Sid's songs inspired this ditty tho' I'd been wanting to write this title for some time now.  Anyway, any feedback is appreciated and will be taken into consideration.   Feeling like V3 could be better....</p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/a-song-a-day" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/a-song-a-day</a></p><p><strong>A SONG A DAY</strong></p><p>Well, I went to the doctor for a checkup today</p><p>And tho’ my hair’s fallen out, has streaks ‘a gray</p><p>There were no pills for Doctor Jones to prescribe</p><p>Left him scratchin’ his head but I don’t wonder why</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away, yeh-ee-yeah, yeh-ee-yeah-yay</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>And I recall that Bruce Springsteen concert back in the day</p><p>He was jumpin’ up an’ down and all around that stage</p><p>And when you look at Mic Jagger and Keith Richards</p><p>They must be doin’ somethin’ right, you get the picture</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away, yeh-ee-yeah, yeh-ee-yeah-yay, yeah-yay</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>And for those times when the song well runs dry</p><p>I write it down in spite of it all, don’t ask why</p><p>‘Cuz as long as I keep my pencil handy and sharp</p><p>My cup overflows as the likes of King David’s harp</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away, yeh-ee-yeah, yeh-ee-yeah-ee-yay</p><p>Yeh-ee-yeah, yeh-ee-yeah-ee-yay</p><p> </p><p>A song a day</p><p>Just a song a day</p><p>A song a day keeps O-BummerCare away, yeah</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away</p><p>A song a day</p><p>Keeps O-BummerCare away, yeh-ee-yeah, yeh-ee-yeah-yay, yeah-yay……….</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Sad Depraved World</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1564/sad-depraved-world</link>
        <pubDate>Tue, 25 Feb 2025 15:12:56 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello in there....  any suggestions on this beast would be helpful.  I'm thinking about changing the G to a Gm and maybe adding another chord; Bb.  We'll see 'cuz Bb I'll need to play as a bar chord and that about kills me to do.  Anyway, it is what it is and what it isn't, too!  </p><p>====&gt;  <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/sad-depraved-world" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/sad-depraved-world</a></p><p><br /></p><p><strong>SAD DEPRAVED WORLD</strong></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>Most people take the lie to their grave</p><p>Some people just wanna be saved</p><p>Some people, all they do is cave</p><p>What a sad world</p><p>A sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>The history books have all been cooked</p><p>To keep the sheeple on the hook</p><p>The clowns running the show are crooks</p><p>What a sad world</p><p>A sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>And the children don’t know who they are</p><p>And if you’re white you won’t go very far</p><p>‘Cuz the Devil’s hand is in the cookie jar</p><p>What a sad world</p><p>A sad depraved world we live in</p><p><br /></p><p>[Refrain]</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 4]</p><p>No amount of money that you’ve saved</p><p>No amount of money to the church you gave</p><p>Will buy you the heaven that you crave</p><p>What a sad world</p><p>A sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Refrain x2]</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p>What a sad depraved world we live in</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 1 Repeats]</p><p>Most people take the lie to their grave</p><p>Some people just wanna be saved</p><p>Some people, all they do is cave</p><p>What a sad world</p><p>A sad depraved world we live in.</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p><p> </p>]]>
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        <title>If I Knew</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1544/if-i-knew</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 23 Feb 2025 15:34:18 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>This song goes out to <a data-username="Kayla813" data-userid="1195" rel="nofollow" href="https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/profile/Kayla813">@Kayla813</a> as she inspired it in all of her youthful knowledge and wisdom.  And Kayla, you're gonna make it!  There are no riches in this world worth more than knowledge and wisdom.  🤗 </p><p>I wish I'd known at a younger age what you know already which is evident in your heartfelt and sometimes gut-wrenching lyrics.  Any suggestions on how to make this song better are appreciated! </p><p>Could use re-doing and thinking about swapping 'stupid' out in V1 for 'gullible' but for now ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/if-i-knew" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/if-i-knew</a></p><p><strong>IF I KNEW</strong></p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>How different my life might’ve been</p><p>Might’ve been</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>My demons, I would’ve faced like a lion</p><p>Told stupid to take a hike</p><p>And when it comes to matters of the heart</p><p>I would’ve made things right</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>How different my life might’ve been</p><p>Might’ve been</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>I wouldn’t’ve wasted my hard-earned cash</p><p>On thing-a-ma-jigs I didn’t need</p><p>I would’ve spent less time talkin’ out of turn</p><p>More time taking heed</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>How different my life might’ve been</p><p>Might’ve been</p><p>Might’ve been, hey!</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>I would’ve paid God a little more respect</p><p>Quit blaming Him for everything</p><p>Now, I know this world is the Devil’s playground</p><p>I never would’ve kissed his ring, oh</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>How different my life might’ve been</p><p>Might’ve been, oh and</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 4]</p><p>If I knew running, you run out of tracks</p><p>I would’ve stayed with you til the end</p><p>But hindsight, babe is twenty-twenty</p><p>And roads traveled you can’t unbend</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 2]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>Yeah, if I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>You an’ me might still be friends</p><p>Still be friends</p><p>We’d still be friends</p><p> </p><p>Ha-ooooooh, Ha-ooooooh, A-haaaa-aaaa</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1/Tag]</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back then</p><p>If I knew what I didn’t know back when</p><p>How different</p><p>How different my life would’ve been</p><p>Could’ve been</p><p>Would’ve been. </p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Where's The Outcry?</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1536/wheres-the-outcry</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 22 Feb 2025 16:55:47 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hope your day is going well.  Yes, another political song.  Can't help it, my country's survival is in my DNA.  As well as other countries such as our brothers and sisters in Europe.  All countries for that matter.  Any suggestions you have are appreciated.  While there is an outcry, in my humble opinion, there isn't enough of one.  As I talk with people in my daily routine, the evidence is clear.  </p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/wheres-the-outcry" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/wheres-the-outcry</a></p><p><strong>WHERE’S THE OUTCRY?</strong></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>They’ve got us busy watchin’ the left hand</p><p>While the right hand picks our pockets</p><p>They’re listening in on our conversations</p><p>And we’re busy talkin’ about squat, an’</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>Have we become blinded by the bubble?</p><p>The illusion of freedom they’ve built?</p><p>Too many people afraid to speak their minds</p><p>For fear of ridicule and white-guilt</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Where’s the outcry for freedom?</p><p>Where’s the outcry for liberty?</p><p>How can there be any justice                                            </p><p>When this country’s backbone is broken?</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>And I thank God for the Paul Revere’s</p><p>But I fear there aren’t enough of them</p><p>And it’s a tough road to travel these days</p><p>It takes the courage of brave women and men</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Where’s the outcry for freedom?</p><p>Where’s the outcry for liberty?</p><p>How can there be any justice                                            </p><p>When this country’s backbone is broken?</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 4]</p><p>And we can blame it on God all we want to</p><p>Forget about the mercy He’s shown</p><p>But there’s just one thing that’ll bring God closer</p><p>We gotta put Him back up on His throne</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Where’s the outcry for freedom?</p><p>Where’s the outcry for liberty?</p><p>How can there be any justice                                            </p><p>When this country’s backbone is broken?</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>Has this country lost her heart?</p><p>Has this country lost her soul?</p><p>Have we lost our ever-loving minds?</p><p>Is there no digging from this black hole?</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 2x]</p><p>Where’s the outcry for freedom?</p><p>Where’s the outcry for liberty?</p><p>How can there be any justice</p><p>When this country’s backbone is broken?</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>The Way It Used To Be</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1353/the-way-it-used-to-be</link>
        <pubDate>Thu, 23 Jan 2025 14:24:25 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Good morning, Songsters! This one, I wrote last night.  Came out a tad longer than I like, just over 4 minutes.  I suppose, I could tighten up the chords in the verses or speed it up a tad, but for now, I'm gonna leave 'er where she is.  Any feedback is always welcome, thank you! </p><p>For a listen to stripped-down ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/the-way-it-used-be" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/the-way-it-used-be</a></p><p><strong>THE WAY IT USED TO BE</strong></p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p> </p><p>It doesn’t matter who becomes President</p><p>The days of democracy are done</p><p>‘Of, by and for the people’ means nothing to them</p><p>There’s talk of blocking out the sun</p><p> </p><p>Robots with attitudes will be running this place</p><p>They don’t get tired and they don’t call in sick</p><p>They’re talking a Universal Basic Income</p><p>Between chicken and bugs, you don’t get to pick</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p><br /></p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p> </p><p>A smile and a hello walkin’ down the street</p><p>A kind man pumping gasoline for you</p><p>There’s never gonna be another Norman Rockwell</p><p>No American true-blue</p><p> </p><p>Children playing gleefully in the public park</p><p>You’re lucky now if you can get them off that screen</p><p>And the Smart Cities the slave-masters got goin’ up</p><p>Fake grass is the only grass that’s green</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p><br /></p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p>Ooh-ooh, Ooh-ooh</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p>The way it used to be</p><p><br /></p><p>[Tag]</p><p>It’s never gonna be</p><p>Never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be</p><p>Never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be</p><p>Never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>It’s never gonna be</p><p>Never gonna be the way it used to be</p><p>The Way It Used To Be.</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Master of the Universe</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1345/master-of-the-universe</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 22 Jan 2025 15:29:34 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
        <guid isPermaLink="false">1345@/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussions</guid>
        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello all ye, Songsters.  Hope this day finds you well.  Been chipping away at this one for some time now.  Think I got it.  What do you think?  Thanks!</p><p>For a listen to raw and real ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/master-of-the-universe" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/master-of-the-universe</a></p><p><strong>MASTER OF THE UNIVERSE</strong></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>Your mountains, majestic</p><p>Your sea, mysterious</p><p>I am in awe of all of the beauty You have made</p><p>A walk along the river</p><p>The hope of being delivered</p><p>The carefully crafted plan that Your right hand has laid</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Master of the Universe</p><p>Creator of all things</p><p>I long to see Your shining face</p><p>Hear Your angels sing</p><p>I long to walk Your streets of gold</p><p>No more pain, no more sorrow</p><p>Immersed in Your brilliant light – </p><p>Endless tomorrows</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>This day that You have made</p><p>The steep price that You paid</p><p>Heavenly Father, thank You for the mercy You’ve shown</p><p>Your grace, unsurpassed</p><p>I know the truth at last</p><p>I no longer fear this world’s shadowy unknown</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Master of the Universe</p><p>Creator of all things</p><p>I long to see Your shining face</p><p>Hear Your angels sing</p><p>I long to walk Your streets of gold</p><p>No more pain, no more sorrow</p><p>Immersed in Your brilliant light –</p><p>Endless tomorrows</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>Hallel-HalleluYah, HalleluYah!</p><p>Hallel-HalleluYah, HalleluYah!</p><p>Hallel-HalleluYah, HalleluYah!</p><p>Hallel-HalleluYah, HalleluYah!</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Master of the Universe</p><p>Creator of all things</p><p>I long to see Your shining face</p><p>Hear Your angels sing</p><p>I long to walk Your streets of gold</p><p>No more pain, no more sorrow</p><p>Immersed in Your brilliant light –</p><p>Endless tomorrows, ooh-oooh..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Wars Don't Happen By Accident</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1077/wars-dont-happen-by-accident</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 27 Nov 2024 14:42:30 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello again.  Thank you for all of your feedback on the last song I uploaded.  Really helps a lot and is appreciated very much.  This one, I imagine is controversial but thought I'd have a go at it in spite of it.  And it truly is GREAT to be part of the GREAT AWAKENING all be it a small part. Went with a minor chord this time due to the gravity of the subject.  I'm not much on the music part but prayerfully gets the point across.  Be interesting to see what a REAL musician could do with it!</p><p>Have a lovely writing day and Happy Thanksgiving if we can say such a thing in dark times as these. </p><p>Much love, Renee</p><p>Raw Recording===&gt;  <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/wars-dont-happen-by-accident" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/wars-dont-happen-by-accident</a></p><p><br /></p><p><strong>WARS DON’T HAPPEN BY ACCIDENT</strong></p><p>WARS are plotted well in advance</p><p>The hidden hand leaves nothing to chance</p><p>Now, they’re callin’ for a New Golden Age</p><p>Bet your last dollar they’re settin’ the stage</p><p> </p><p>Funding both sides no way they can lose</p><p> The Grand Chessboard is their twisted muse</p><p> They’ve always wanted a world of their own</p><p> Long before that angel rolled ‘way that stone</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p> Doesn’t matter which war you choose</p><p> Doesn’t matter when it happened</p><p> Doesn’t matter what you learned in school</p><p>Wars don’t happen, no-no</p><p>Wars don’t happen</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident</p><p> </p><p>You can choose to keep your head in the sand</p><p>Or you can grow a set, fight the hidden hand</p><p>You’ll be thankful, buddy that you did</p><p>When you’re tuckin’ in bed at night your kids</p><p> </p><p>‘Cuz it’s no joke losin’ sleep over Putin</p><p>And all the hype on the News about nukin’</p><p>Now, they’re settin’ up FEMA camps strategically</p><p>Civil war or World War Three, no it</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Doesn’t matter which war you choose</p><p>Doesn’t matter when it happened</p><p>Doesn’t matter what you learned in school</p><p>Wars don’t happen, no-no</p><p> Wars don’t happen</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident, oh and</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>Just because bombs don’t go off</p><p>Missiles and bullets don’t fly</p><p>Doesn’t mean the world’s not at war</p><p>All you gotta do is open your eyes</p><p>The 'Bird Flu' should be no surprise, no it</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Doesn’t matter which war you choose</p><p>Doesn’t matter when it happened</p><p>Doesn’t matter what you learned in school</p><p>Wars don’t happen, no-no-no</p><p>Wars don’t happen</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident, no</p><p> </p><p>Ooh, Ooh, Ooh, Ooh</p><p>Ooh, Ooh, Ooh, Ooh</p><p>Ooh, Ooh, Ooh, Ooh</p><p>Ooh, Ooh, Ooh, Ooh</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus/Tag]</p><p>Doesn’t matter which war you choose</p><p>Doesn’t matter when it happened</p><p>Doesn’t matter what you learned in school</p><p>Wars don’t happen, no-no, no-no</p><p>Wars don’t happen</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident</p><p>By accident</p><p>Wars don’t happen by accident!</p><p> </p><p>© 2024 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>I Really Wanted To Believe You</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1073/i-really-wanted-to-believe-you</link>
        <pubDate>Mon, 25 Nov 2024 14:27:50 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello, I'm new here.  Enjoying the lyrics and songs posted here very much.  Taking a deep breath to post one of my latest messes as the world is a mess. I'm a better lyricist (at least I think) than a musician.  My skills are limited in that department and I'm surely no singer but I posted this one on SoundCloud yesterday in spite of it all.  I record directly into my iphone, zero edits so if you're not into raw music you can skip the recording.  Any feedback is appreciated.  Thank you! </p><p>Have a lovely songwriting day, Renee :-)</p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/i-really-wanted-to-believe-you" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/i-really-wanted-to-believe-you</a></p><p><strong>I REALLY WANTED TO BELIEVE YOU</strong></p><p>Monday mornin’ drivin’ to my second job</p><p>Three red lights in a row my head begins to pound</p><p>Homeless man street corner holdin’ up a sign</p><p>Reach for a dollar bill not a nickel to be found</p><p>Now, you’re off on another gallivant</p><p>While the world at large is at war</p><p>Hear babes wailing all the way from the mid-East</p><p>What do we need a President for?</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>I really wanted to believe you</p><p>Mister President, I really wanted to</p><p>Wanted to believe that you actually cared about the little people</p><p>But the tall promises you made</p><p>Like blue smoke they’ve faded</p><p>And I don’t feel nothin’ these dark days but broken down an’ jaded</p><p> </p><p>Now, I’m standin’ in line at the supermarket</p><p>Tryin’ to decide what I can do without</p><p>‘Cuz a hundred bucks for two bags of groceries</p><p>Ain’t what livin’ should be all about</p><p>You yack about ‘freedom an’ democracy’</p><p>When votin’ doesn’t mean squat</p><p>‘Cuz I don’t recall votin’ for higher taxes</p><p>Nor did I vote for mandated shots</p><p> </p><p>I really wanted to believe you</p><p>Mister President, I really wanted to</p><p>Wanted to believe that you actually cared about the little people</p><p>But the tall promises you made</p><p>Like blue smoke they’ve faded</p><p>And I don’t feel nothin’ these dark days but broken down an’ jaded</p><p><br /></p><p>Oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh</p><p>Oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh </p><p> </p><p>Look around more stack ‘em an’ pack ‘em’s goin’ up</p><p>More foreclosure signs than ever before</p><p>The Banksters are fatter than they’ve ever been</p><p>Other than their WOKEISM whores</p><p>And you’ve fallen flat on your face again</p><p>And I can’t take the B.S. anymore</p><p>Thank God for the modern-day Paul Reveres</p><p>What do we need</p><p>What do we need</p><p>What do we need a President for?</p><p> </p><p>I really wanted to believe you</p><p>Mister President, I really wanted to</p><p>Wanted to believe that you actually cared about the little people</p><p>Oh, but the tall promises you made</p><p>Like blue smoke they’ve faded</p><p>And I don’t feel nothin’ these dark days but broken down an’ jaded</p><p>No, I don’t feel nothin’ these dark days but broken down an’ jaded.</p><p> </p><p>© 2024 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Motherland</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/821/motherland</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 25 Sep 2024 13:30:23 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Covers</category>
        <dc:creator>StefPo</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>This is my Cover  of one of Natalie Merchants most beautiful songs ever</p><p>I love this song, i hope I do it justice...:-)</p><p>And as always please excuse the poor recording, i'm still not better at this, but i'm trying...</p><p><a href="https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14855113" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14855113</a></p>]]>
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        <title>West Virginia</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/253/west-virginia</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2023 09:54:23 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Harry</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://youtu.be/AMIdQQ8LT7A" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://youtu.be/AMIdQQ8LT7A</a></p><p><br /></p><p>————-</p><p>Verse 1</p><p><br /></p><p>D</p><p>The lot is littered with oil and glass</p><p>G</p><p>Just a night ago the speaker’s blasted </p><p><br /></p><p>A</p><p>A West Virginia girl who liked to hop trains</p><p>D</p><p>Is trying to manage all the morning pain</p><p><br /></p><p>D</p><p>Depleting everything, a soul bereft </p><p>G</p><p>A little residue is all that’s left</p><p><br /></p><p>A</p><p>I saw her at Red Rocks in ninety nine</p><p>D</p><p>She swore she was and would always be fine</p><p><br /></p><p>F   C   G</p><p><br /></p><p>CHORUS </p><p><strong>F				    C		   F.           C </strong></p><p><strong>Take me up to Nassau up to Uniondale </strong></p><p><strong>F						   C					  G</strong></p><p><strong>The last time I was there was off the rails </strong></p><p><strong>F				    C</strong></p><p><strong>Way before Katrina </strong></p><p><strong>F				C</strong></p><p><strong>Down at Tipatina’s </strong></p><p><strong>F				        C					G</strong></p><p><strong>That’s where she first learned how to sail</strong></p><p><strong>F					C</strong></p><p><strong>Take me to the river</strong></p><p><strong>F					    C</strong></p><p><strong>We can </strong>jump <strong>the levee</strong></p><p><strong>F						  C.            G</strong></p><p><strong>Hope that we both live to tell the tale</strong></p><p>—-</p><p>Verse 2</p><p>D</p><p>They used to not bother with girls like her</p><p>G</p><p>She’d just look pretty and call them sir</p><p>	A												D</p><p>But nowadays they’ve fully changed the game </p><p>D</p><p>West Virginia was sweet but she was never clean </p><p>G</p><p>A higher spirit I’ve never seen </p><p>A.      										D</p><p>I never even knew her original family name </p><p>D</p><p>I sure wanted to have her when I saw her dance </p><p>G</p><p>But I never made a move in my clumsy trance</p><p>   A													     D</p><p>It’s probably for the best considering all that came </p><p><br /></p><p>F.   C.   G</p><p><br /></p><p>Chorus</p><p>—-</p><p>Verse 3</p><p>D</p><p>She was trucking along in the side show</p><p>G</p><p>They started cracking down and gave her a blow</p><p>A													D</p><p>Picked up a case of intent to spread it around </p><p>D</p><p>Well she couldn’t make court she was making the shows</p><p>G</p><p>Kansas City would just have to know </p><p>A												    D</p><p>She had no intent to come back to their town </p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p>(Pick up tempo)</p><p>D</p><p>She was on I-10 when she got the news </p><p>G</p><p>Headed to the Varsity in Baton Rouge</p><p>A													  D</p><p>Searched the van now she’s got another charge</p><p>D</p><p>It’s quite a shame cause with the fta </p><p> G.       </p><p>She’s gone back to Missouri crying all the way </p><p>			A 											   D</p><p>Cause West Virginia she don’t look good in Orange </p><p><br /></p><p>F.  C.   G</p><p><br /></p><p>Chorus</p>]]>
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        <title>Cuckoo's Nest</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/147/cuckoos-nest</link>
        <pubDate>Tue, 28 Mar 2023 21:38:04 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Covers</category>
        <dc:creator>CorkingCrackBand</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://on.soundcloud.com/4SdVF" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://on.soundcloud.com/4SdVF</a></p><p><br /></p><p>A cover of both songs (traditional folk songs themselves) by the same name by two separate folk rock outfits. The first 2/3's is a cover of Morris On's (functionally The Albion Band) song Cuckoo's Nest and the last 1/3 is Cuckoo's Nest by Steeleye Span - which was the last 1/3 of a song they did called Drinking Down the Moon! Confused?!😀 My vocal is pretty strained at the start but is better (when hidden) when the instruments come in. I added some lyrics in to Steeleye Spans song, namely:</p><p><br /></p><p>The King is dead</p><p>The King is dead</p><p>His crown is on the ground</p><p>The King is dead</p><p>The King is dead</p><p>His body can't be found</p><p>Perhaps he walk amongst us</p><p>No tomb to home his rest</p><p>Forever ever hunting down the Cuckoo's Nest</p><p><br /></p><p>Hi the Cuckoo</p><p>Ho the Cuckoo</p><p>Hi the Cuckoo's Nest</p><p>Hi the Cuckoo</p><p>Ho the Cuckoo</p><p>Hi the Cuckoo's Nest</p><p>Sirens on the rock put many men to tortured test</p><p>Tempted by their cravings of the Cuckoo's Nest</p>]]>
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