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        <title>collaboration — The Songwriters Forum</title>
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        <pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2026 06:58:19 +0000</pubDate>
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        <title>Bittersweet Taboo</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1270/bittersweet-taboo</link>
        <pubDate>Thu, 09 Jan 2025 14:40:28 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Barry</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=6403928" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=6403928</a></p><p><br /></p><p>Bittersweet Taboo</p><p>Vlad Pogrebinski Music and Vocals</p><p>Jason Mento Guitar solo</p><p>Lyrics Barry Williams</p><p>© 2019 Vlad Pogrebinski - Mento - Williams</p><p><br /></p><p>V1</p><p>The night was cool, the sky was dark,</p><p>The moon was low and thin.</p><p>She took me to a place that night.</p><p>I should have never been</p><p>What she gave she took away,</p><p>On lonely lovers beach</p><p>Mumblin’ moanin’ fumblin’ love</p><p>That seemed so out of reach</p><p>(Lift)</p><p>Her skin was soft as angel wings,</p><p>Her eyes Bahama blue.</p><p>(Chorus)</p><p>I felt oceans crashing deep inside</p><p>Like a hurricane swept right through my mind</p><p>I knew she just chewed up my pride</p><p>But I was too blind to see</p><p>On the sultry shores of Malibu</p><p>I could taste that bittersweet taboo</p><p>And I don’t know to this day, what came over me.</p><p>V2</p><p>I should have run, I should have walked away</p><p>As I smelled her perfume</p><p>I’d heard of games she made men play</p><p>Without any rules</p><p>She’s like a siren in the night</p><p>Who could resist the tune</p><p>I knew that something wasn’t right</p><p>Inside that blue lagoon.</p><p>(Lift)</p><p>Her skin was soft as angel wings,</p><p>Her eyes Bahama blue.</p><p>(Jason Mento on Guitar)</p><p>(Bridge)</p><p>With passion dancing in the tide</p><p>And love made in moonlight hues</p><p>My mind goes back in time</p><p>(Chorus)</p><p>I felt oceans crashing deep inside,</p><p>Like a hurricane swept right through my mind,</p><p>I knew she just chewed up my pride,</p><p>But I was too blind to see.</p><p>On the sultry shores of Malibu,</p><p>I could taste that bittersweet taboo,</p><p>And I don’t know to this day what came over me - X3</p>]]>
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        <title>The Songwriter's Forum</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1101/the-songwriters-forum</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 04 Dec 2024 14:40:31 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>While I haven't been here that long, I was inspired to write this lyric by a comment of StoneFlowers aka 'Stoney'. And then, as I dug in, I came across the founder, Michael Frisbey's page.  A remarkable man indeed to put together such a wonderful site where songwriter's from all over the world can help each other hone their craft!  And a huge THANK YOU to those who maintain and have kept this incredible site going.  </p><p>P.S. Don't feel I'm good enough to put music to this so if anyone out there would like to, please have at it! And nothing in this lyric is written in stone other than my heart. So, feel free to tweak as you like. </p><p><strong>THE SONGWRITER’S FORUM</strong></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>We got Rainy Day Man</p><p>Stoney, Mora and Sid</p><p>Folks from all over the world</p><p>A bunch ‘a big kids</p><p>‘Cuz we like to rhyme</p><p>And we like to play</p><p>At The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>Every day’s a great day, and</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>I’m so happy to be here</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>Among friends of good cheer</p><p>No finer decorum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>So, if you have a song</p><p>Or a lyric to share</p><p>All you gotta do is sign up</p><p>We’ll see you there</p><p>‘Cuz we like to sing</p><p>And we like to play</p><p>At The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>You’ll be well on your way</p><p><br /></p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>Since 2005, founded by Mike Frisbey</p><p>He built this glorious site from the ground up</p><p>May Mike Frisbey rest in peace, knowing</p><p>His ‘footprints in the sands of time’ are kickin’ butt!</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>I’m so happy to be here</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>Among friends of good cheer</p><p>No finer decorum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus 2]</p><p>I’m so happy to be here</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>A family of good cheer</p><p>No finer decorum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p>The Songwriter’s Forum</p><p> </p><p>© 2024 Renee La Chapelle</p>]]>
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        <title>OFELIA</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1083/ofelia</link>
        <pubDate>Fri, 29 Nov 2024 21:40:18 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Occasionally, I write a lyric from the opposite gender.  So, any gentlemen out there who likes this lyric enough and would like to co-write, please let me know.  Willing to pay my share of studio time if needed.  And nothing's written in stone, so have at it!  </p><p>Yours truly,</p><p>hummer</p><p><br /></p><p><strong>OFELIA</strong></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>How did I let someone steal you away?</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Unlike Amelia</p><p>I’m still missin’ you today</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>Your long black hair</p><p>And your baby-blue eyes</p><p>There’s no woman alive lovelier than you</p><p>The way you took me in</p><p>Cleansed me of my sin</p><p>You were my messiah darlin’, it’s true</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>How did I let someone steal you away?</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Unlike Amelia</p><p>I’m still missin’ you today</p><p> </p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>I fell off of the wagon</p><p>Breathin’ fire like a dragon</p><p>The whiskey went down easy, I fell hard</p><p>And I know it’s no excuse</p><p>You sufferin’ my abuse</p><p>Knowin’ you held in your heart my ace card</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>How did I let someone steal you away?</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Unlike Amelia</p><p>I’m still missin’ you today</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>Now, ten years of the good life is gone</p><p>Winnin’ you back’s the only thing keeps me hangin’ on</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus/Tag]</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>How did I let someone steal you away?</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Unlike Amelia</p><p>I’m still missin’ you today</p><p>Ofelia</p><p>Unlike Amelia</p><p>I’m still missin’ you…missin’ you more, darlin’ each day.</p><p> </p><p>© 2024 Renee La Chapelle</p><p><br /></p><p><em>Inspired by “Fear The Walking Dead” the character, “Ofelia”.</em></p>]]>
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        <title>Rattlesnake Shack</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/216/rattlesnake-shack</link>
        <pubDate>Thu, 25 May 2023 23:29:59 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>Andrea</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>I wrote these lyrics for a collab challenge with my partner, Jeff, in mind. He has an awesome country voice as you can see. He is actually coming off a virus, but I think he still sounds great. He also helped with some lines we tweaked. </p><p>Happy to hear all feedback :)</p><p><br /></p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/jeff-walker-4/rattlesnake-shack" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">Rattlesnake Shack by Jeff Walker 4 (soundcloud.com)</a></p><p>Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>Lyrics by Andrea Brennan</p><p>Music by Jeff Walker</p><p><br /></p><p>V1</p><p>On the outskirts of Phoenix</p><p>There's a lowdown dirty dive</p><p>Where a man like myself</p><p>Can always find a good time</p><p>V2</p><p>Skull and crossbones on the door</p><p>And the liquor flows free</p><p>An oasis in the desert</p><p>For a thirsty guy like me</p><p>Chorus</p><p>Enter the fold</p><p>Of the devil's hold</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>Blood runs colder than a witches tit</p><p>And every heart is black</p><p>Pick your poison</p><p>And watch your back</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>V3</p><p>Every fellow's packing</p><p>Counting on a fight</p><p>Half of why I come here </p><p>In the dead of the night</p><p>V4</p><p>Where the sparks are gonna fly</p><p>Is anybody's guess</p><p>Every friend is a foe</p><p>Inside this viper's nest</p><p>Chorus</p><p>Enter the fold</p><p>Of the devil's hold</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>Blood runs colder than a witches tit</p><p>And every heart is black</p><p>Pick your poison</p><p>And watch your back</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>Bridge</p><p>Some may think I'm crazy</p><p>Yet, some will understand</p><p>If you care to join me</p><p>You know where I am</p><p>Chorus</p><p>Enter the fold</p><p>Of the devil's hold</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p><p>Blood runs colder than a witches tit</p><p>And every heart is black</p><p>Pick your poison</p><p>And watch your back</p><p>Down at the Rattlesnake Shack</p>]]>
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        <title>A poets calling - Lyrics</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/106/a-poets-calling-lyrics</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2023 16:10:53 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>StefPo</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hi all. I wrote the following lines a couple of days ago, when I was in a mellow and somehow melancholy mood. I don't have the music down yet. Maybe some of you would like to collaborate on this one, both lines and music. Anyhow, feedback is highly welcome...</p><p><br /></p><p><strong>A Poets calling</strong></p><p>A poet should never see life as it is</p><p>but always as it should be</p><p>he always should trust in a manner on his </p><p>own unique sensibility</p><p> </p><p>The rain for instance is never the rain</p><p>when it pours in abundance from above</p><p>but wrapped in his beautiful mindfully words</p><p>as tears of a heavenly love</p><p> </p><p>Nor should he recall to the winters snow</p><p>as cold and as ice and as hard</p><p>But more than a snow-white blanket, slow</p><p>to cover the land as a guard </p><p> </p><p>And if a stone be it tossed into a lake</p><p>while he watches the ripples run free</p><p>he should describe this disturbance awake</p><p>As the waves of his poem-to-be</p><p> </p><p>when it happens that he is alone in the night</p><p>And his thoughts may run wild in the still</p><p>Let the candles of his thoughts be his guiding light</p><p>as a torch for the darkness to fill</p><p> </p><p>and at last if he sits in front of his book,</p><p>to be filled with the rhymes he has gained</p><p>He is not afraid of the empty page, look</p><p>It's his canvas on which he can paint</p>]]>
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        <title>The Storm - collaboration with Nathan Gerry</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/52/the-storm-collaboration-with-nathan-gerry</link>
        <pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2023 00:42:50 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>Andrea</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>I joined the random collaboration thread during 50/90 and was so lucky to be paired with Nathan. I sent him the lyrics and he performed this in one take. I hope you like it. All crits welcome. </p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/user-444928277/the-storm-collaboration-with-nathan-gerry" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">Stream The Storm - Collaboration with Nathan Gerry by Andrea Brennan | Listen online for free on SoundCloud</a></p><p>The Storm</p><p>Lyrics: Andrea Brennan</p><p>Music and vocals: Nathan Gerry</p><p><br /></p><p>V1</p><p>I fear the dark clouds</p><p>Hanging over my head</p><p>Thunder is booming</p><p>My sight turning red</p><p>Obscuring the path</p><p>To what lies, what lies ahead</p><p><br /></p><p>V2</p><p>Press myself forward</p><p>The progress is slow</p><p>I stumble and fall</p><p>From bumps in the road</p><p>I turn a new corner</p><p>But there's still, a long way to go</p><p><br /></p><p>Chorus</p><p>You are the storm</p><p>That turns day to night</p><p>Inside the darkness</p><p>There is no light</p><p>You are the storm</p><p>I try to fight</p><p>I'm holding</p><p>Holding on for dear life</p><p><br /></p><p>Bridge</p><p>Rain washes over me</p><p>Cleansing my mind</p><p>I open my eyes</p><p>No longer blind</p><p><br /></p><p>Chorus</p><p>I am the storm</p><p>That turns day to night</p><p>Inside the darkness</p><p>There is no light</p><p>I am the storm</p><p>I need to fight</p><p>And I'm holding</p><p>Holding on for my life</p>]]>
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        <title>I’ll Be Good For You</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/67/i-ll-be-good-for-you</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 15 Jan 2023 19:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>cmaja</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[I’ll Be Good For You<br /> Music: Giko Gomez, Lyrics: Charles M. Anderson, Vocals: Marica Moire<br /><br /> https://youtu.be/GC6sXeOJM4E <br /><br /> Instrumental intro: (0:00-0:23)<br /><br /> Verse 1: (0:23-0:46) <br /> Now that you’re all alone, love, I see it in your eyes <br /> Like clouds that hide the sun from the clear blue sky <br /> Let me help clear your view, bring back your loving smile <br /> You can lean on me for a little while <br /><br /> Chorus: (0:47-1:09)<br /> I’ll be good for you<br /> Help you forget the past, give your life a spark <br /> I’ll be good for you<br /> Help you dry your tears and mend your broken heart <br /><br /> Post chorus: (1:10-1:44) <br /> Did you ever think you’d come to living on your very own<br /> Do you wake at night in fear that you’re far away from home<br /> Do you hide you tears when you see two young lovers hand-in-hand<br /> Please just step into the light and then you’ll understand <br /> Because I’ll be good for you <br /> Yes, I’ll be good for you <br /> Understand <br /><br /> Verse 2: (1:45-2:08) <br /> Now’s the time to start a new chapter in your life <br /> Like the sun breaks up all the dark clouds in the sky <br /> Just forget the love that’s lost and see the love that’s true <br /> If you realize that I’ll be good for you <br /><br /> Chorus: (2:09-2:31) <br /> Oh yes, I’ll be good for you <br /> Help you see love at last, give your life a start<br /> I’ll be good for you <br /> Help you lose your fears and cheer your broken heart<br /><br /> Instrumental break: (2:33-2:45) <br /> (Background vocals: <br /> Yes, I’ll be good for you <br /> Yes, I’ll be good for you <br /> Understand…<br /> I’ll be good for you)<br /><br /> Verse 3: (2:47-3:10)<br /> You know I’ll do what I can to help you recognize <br /> That I love you as you are a treasure in my eyes <br /> Like roses bloom from rain and sun in the days of spring<br /> Your love brings me alive, you’re my everything<br /><br /> Chorus: (3:10-3:32)<br /> So, I’ll be good for you<br /> Help you forget the past, give your life a spark <br /> Yes, I’ll be good for you<br /> Help you dry your tears and mend your broken heart<br /><br /> Coda: (3:33-3:45) <br /> Know that I will be your home<br /> No more dreaming all alone, my love<br /> You know that I’ll be good for]]>
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