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        <pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2026 23:28:55 +0000</pubDate>
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        <title>It Could Happen Today</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1919/it-could-happen-today</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 06 Jul 2025 17:13:44 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>I guess, they don't call it the blues for no reason.  Sorry to be such a downer, especially on so-called Independence Day weekend, USA.  Any feedback is welcome.  </p><p>Backing Track provided by Gilad Perry, Youtube</p><p>For a listen ==&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/it-could-happen-today" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/it-could-happen-today</a></p><p><br /></p><p>IT COULD HAPPEN TODAY</p><p>Wake in my easy chair again</p><p>Headin’ on three a.m.</p><p>Sea aquarium screensaver on my TV</p><p>Flippin’ through Netflix shows</p><p>Seen most of ‘em you know</p><p>YouTube war news brings pain and misery</p><p>Could be today, could be tomorrow, no time to borrow</p><p> </p><p>You got Trump’s Big Ugly Bill</p><p>Bibi out for the kill</p><p>‘Independence’ Day was just yesterday</p><p>But there’s nothin’ independent</p><p>‘Bout a bought-off president</p><p>And it seems the whole world has turned away</p><p>Could be today, could be tomorrow, no time, no time to borrow, oh</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>It could happen today</p><p>Oh, it could happen tomorrow</p><p>Whatever it, whatever it may be</p><p>Weatherwarfare</p><p>Biowarfare</p><p>Nuclear holocaust, we’ll hafta wait an’ see, yeah</p><p> </p><p>Now, it’s still the middle of night</p><p>Catch more sleep I might</p><p>But I can’t shake this feeling, a bad moon ahead</p><p>‘Cuz the Devil’s doin’ the dealin’</p><p>And the Devil’s doin’ the stealin’</p><p>And I’m feelin’ fortunate to be layin’ in a warm bed, ‘cuz</p><p>It could be today, could be tomorrow, the end of sorrow, yeah</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Oh, it could happen today</p><p>Oh and it could happen tomorrow</p><p>Whatever it, whatever it may be</p><p>We got weatherwarfare</p><p>Biowarfare</p><p>Nuclear holocaust, we’ll hafta wait an’ see, oh</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p><em> </em></p><p><em>Oh, it could happen today, no more pain, no more sorrow..yeah</em></p><p> </p><p>It could happen today</p><p>It could happen tomorrow</p><p>Whatever, whatever, whatever it may be</p><p>They got weatherwarfare</p><p>Biowarfare</p><p>Nuclear holocaust, I guess we’ll hafta wait, wait, wait an’ see..yeah</p><p> </p><p>Could be today, could be tomorrow, end of all sorrow</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p><p> </p>]]>
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        <title>Ain't One of Us Worthy</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1872/aint-one-of-us-worthy</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 15 Jun 2025 17:03:21 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>I guess you could call this the Unworthy Blues.  Anyway, thanks for listening, commenting.  Appreciate you!</p><p>Backing Track provided by JamTracksChannel, Youtube.  </p><p>For a listen ==&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/aint-one-of-us-worthy" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/aint-one-of-us-worthy</a></p><p><br /></p><p>AIN’T ONE OF US WORTHY</p><p>V1</p><p>As hard as this life sometimes seems</p><p>I hate the thought of leavin’ here</p><p>Gettin’ older, mostly used up</p><p>Soon, I’ll disappear</p><p>Much as I sit back</p><p>No way to fit in</p><p>I cut myself some slack</p><p>We’ve all been known to sin</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy of Heaven</p><p>Not one of us worthy, no</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>‘Cuz as bad as things are at the top</p><p>Down here, things ain’t much better</p><p>Bent so far, the Golden Rule</p><p>Nobody stays together, no</p><p>Sometimes I wonder why</p><p>We haven’t taken the fall</p><p>Lovers of the lie</p><p>To the Devil handin’ it all</p><p> </p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy of Heaven</p><p>Not one of us worthy</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>No, ain’t one of us worthy of Heaven</p><p>Not one of us worthy</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>In the end God will decide</p><p>Who lives the celestial star</p><p>In the end God will decide</p><p>Who, other than Him, can reach that far</p><p>‘Cuz there you go again</p><p>Bein’ a dick again</p><p>Up to your old tricks</p><p>Losin’ another friend</p><p> </p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy, no</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy, no</p><p>Ain’t one of us worthy of Heaven</p><p>No, not one of us worthy..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>1984 Blues</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1865/1984-blues</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2025 12:21:41 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Sad as it may seem, this song depicts the enslavement the powers-that-be want for humanity.  This may not be what you see and prayerfully, all of it doesn't come to fruition.  Any constructive feedback is appreciated.  Thanks!</p><p>Just noticed my rhyme scheme differs from verse to verse, dang....now how did that happen?  Probably 'cuz I wrote some of it while working on my phone and then the rest when I got home at my computer.  Oh, well, such is life.  </p><p>Backing track provided by Backing Tracks Center, YouTube. </p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/1984-blues" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/1984-blues</a></p><p><br /></p><p>1984 BLUES</p><p>V1</p><p>They don’t want you on a plane</p><p>They don’t want you on a train</p><p>They don’t want you in a car</p><p>They don’t want you going very far</p><p>They want you on a scooter</p><p>Home on your computer</p><p>AI as your tutor, yeah</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>Oh, and they want you behind a gate</p><p>Being nobody great</p><p>Dependent upon the state</p><p>Psychotropics, the bait</p><p>Oh, and they want you on a scooter</p><p>Home on your computer</p><p>A blowup doll your suitor</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Oh, and you can’t say Orwell</p><p>No, you can’t say Orwell</p><p>No, you can’t say Orwell didn’t have a clue</p><p>Awh, ‘cuz looks like 1984 has come true, yeh</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>They don’t want you on a plane</p><p>They don’t want you on a train</p><p>They don’t want you in a house</p><p>Want you timid as a mouse</p><p>Oh, and they want you on a scooter</p><p>Home on your computer</p><p>AI as your tutor</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>V4</p><p>Oh, and they want you tracked and traced</p><p>On earth, every single face</p><p>The entire human-race</p><p>They want us erased</p><p>Oh, and they want you on a scooter</p><p>Home on your computer</p><p>A blowup doll your suitor, yeah</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Oh, and you can’t say Orwell</p><p>No, you can’t say Orwell</p><p>You can’t say Orwell didn’t have a clue</p><p>Awh, ‘cuz ooks like 1984 has come true..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Living in Jubilation</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1862/living-in-jubilation</link>
        <pubDate>Mon, 09 Jun 2025 12:49:21 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Something a little different.  Really cool 'Funk Fusion Blues' backing track by JamTracksChannel, Youtube.  Didn't dare to try an' play along, just sang.  Not your typical Christian song but I think it still qualifies; maybe. Any feedback is welcome, thank you!</p><p><br /></p><p>LIVING IN JUBILATION</p><p>Flat earth</p><p>Or, spinning globe</p><p>We’re all here for the duration</p><p>Why do we bicker?</p><p>Why do we dicker with the Devil?</p><p>‘Cuz we should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>Big Bang</p><p>Or, Creationism</p><p>It’s a matter of interpretation</p><p>Why do we bicker?</p><p>Why do we dicker with the Devil? Yeah</p><p>We should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Let the Devil take a vacation, yeah</p><p>Oh, ‘cuz we should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>By faith</p><p>Or, by works</p><p>I believe it’s a combination</p><p>Why do we bicker?</p><p>Why do we dicker with the Devil? Oh, why?</p><p>‘Cuz we should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Let the Devil, let that ol’ devil take a vacation</p><p>Oh, ‘cuz we should be living in jubilation, yeah, oh ‘cuz</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>This is the day the Father has made</p><p>This is the day the Father has made</p><p>The Father Almighty, this is the day He has made, yeah</p><p>Oh, and we should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>CHORUS</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>Let the Devil, that ol’ devil take a vacation</p><p>Oh, ‘cuz we should be living in jubilation</p><p> </p><p>Living in jubilation</p><p>We should be living in jubilation</p><p>Let the Devil, let the Devil take a long vacation</p><p>Oh, ‘cuz we should be living in jubilation..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Lovely Day For A Picnic</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1852/lovely-day-for-a-picnic</link>
        <pubDate>Thu, 05 Jun 2025 13:29:46 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Driving to a customer's...wishing I had more time to stop and witness tho' I've witnessed the splendor of vultures dining in my front yard! 😋 Really remarkable to watch!  Probably needs to be re-sung, but what I got for now.  Any feedback is welcome, thank you!  </p><p>Cool Backing Track provided by MJ's Backing Tracks and Studio.  Find him on YouTube!</p><p>For a listen ==&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/lovely-day-for-a-picnic" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/lovely-day-for-a-picnic</a></p><p><br /></p><p>LOVELY DAY FOR A PICNIC</p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>What a lovely day</p><p>Lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of an armadillo</p><p>Yes, it’s a lovely day</p><p>A lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of an armadillo</p><p><br /></p><p>V1</p><p> And they’re taking turns</p><p> Polite to one another</p><p> They’re ‘a taking turns</p><p> Flipping that carcass over</p><p> Now big ol’dog comes along</p><p> Vultures gettin’ nervous</p><p> But they’re standing their ground</p><p> Scavenging is their purpose, yeah</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus 1]</p><p>What a lovely day</p><p>Lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of an armadillo</p><p>Yes, it’s a lovely day</p><p>A lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of an armadillo</p><p><br /></p><p>V2</p><p>Now, three hours later</p><p>In the stickiest of sun</p><p>Them vultures still goin’ at it</p><p>Gettin’ the job done</p><p>Reminds of the government</p><p>Swoopin’ in for the kill</p><p>Everything the government does</p><p>Against the people’s will</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus 2]</p><p>What a lovely day</p><p>Lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of America</p><p>Yes, it’s a lovely day</p><p>A lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of America</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus 3]</p><p>What a lovely day</p><p>Lovely day for a picnic</p><p>We got vultures dining on what’s left of an armadillo</p><p>Yes, it’s a lovely day</p><p>A lovely day for a picnic</p><p>Oh, we got vultures dining on what’s left of America, oooh-oooh, oooh-oooh</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>What Happened To Our Love</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1823/what-happened-to-our-love</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 25 May 2025 13:38:24 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hope you're all having a nice weekend!  Here in the good ol' USA (ha-ha) it's Memorial Day Weekend.  That means we get an extra day off from the plantation!!  Yaaaay!!!!!  Anyway, thought I'd lighten it up a bit with a love's over blues ditty. Had alotta fun singing with this very cool backing track!    😍  Backing Track ==&gt; <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OUQGtd16XO8&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=103" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OUQGtd16XO8&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=103</a></p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/what-happened-to-our-love" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/what-happened-to-our-love</a></p><p>Any feedback is welcome,  R. </p><p><br /></p><p>WHAT HAPPENED TO OUR LOVE</p><p>I don’t know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>I don’t know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>You an’ me used to fit like a fine pair ‘a gloves, yes we did!</p><p> </p><p>Could it be you’ve fallen, fallen for somebody new?</p><p>Could it be you’ve fallen, fallen for somebody new?</p><p>Side-steppin’ on my heart from here to Kalamazoo</p><p> </p><p>A woman always knows when somethin’ ain’t right</p><p>I said, a woman always knows when somethin’ ain’t right</p><p>And I’ve been waitin’ home for you, hon to call all night, yes I have, yes sirry! </p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>I don’t know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>No, I don’t know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>You an’ me used to fit like a pair ‘a fine gloves</p><p> </p><p>Now, I heard it through the grapevine you were dancin’ with her</p><p>Yeah, I heard it through the grapevine you were dancin’ with her</p><p>Well, don’t be creepin’ around here, hon the mornin’ after, no-no-no!</p><p> </p><p>Now I know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>I said, now I know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>Well, there’s no better time, hon to be takin’ off the gloves</p><p><br /></p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>Now I know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>Oh, yes, now I know what happened, what happened to our love</p><p>There’s no better time, hon to be takin’ off the gloves, I’m takin’ ‘em off-off-off!</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p>Adlib: I knew I shouldn’t of, should ‘a never, would’ve-could’ve should’ve..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Chased My Baby Across The USA</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1805/chased-my-baby-across-the-usa</link>
        <pubDate>Tue, 20 May 2025 14:28:33 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>.....true story of many moons ago.  Who knew 40-sum years later, I'd write a song about it. I hope you enjoy and maybe even relate!  Appreciate any comments, suggestions..</p><p>For a listen ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/chased-my-baby-across-the-usa" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/chased-my-baby-across-the-usa</a></p><p>Very cool backing track by Randy Soller <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nnq8wABENgk" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nnq8wABENgk</a></p><p>Yours,</p><p>Renee</p><p>CHASED MY BABY ACROSS THE USA</p><p>Ooooh-ooooh-ooooh</p><p>Well, I chased my baby, chased my baby across the USA</p><p>From Connecticut to San Diego took that bus all the way</p><p>Called him up in Columbus, tell him I’d be there in two days</p><p> </p><p>That ol’ Greyhound, she wasn’t exactly a nice ride</p><p>That ol’ Greyhound, she wasn’t exactly a nice ride</p><p>But for a hundred bucks or so I could easily set aside my pride</p><p> </p><p>Well, my baby was a cook at the Cote D’Azur in San Diego</p><p>My baby was a cook at the Cote D’Azur in San Diego</p><p>We couldn’t afford to eat there but that’s the way it goes</p><p> </p><p>Well, I got bored one day when my baby was hard at work</p><p>Yeah, I got bored one day when my baby was hard at work</p><p>I stole a carton of Marlborough cigarettes and got arrested, yes I did</p><p> </p><p>Cops threw me in the juvenile detention jail for three days</p><p>I was bangin’ my head on the wall in that jailhouse for three days</p><p>The same jail as the Cleveland Elementary School shooter, yes-sirry!</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>Well, they finally released me, judge said in San Diego, I couldn’t stay</p><p>Yeah, they finally released me, judge said I had to go home straight away</p><p>Well, that’s what I get for chasin’ my baby across the USA..</p><p> </p><p>[Music]</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Ability To Dance</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1379/ability-to-dance</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2025 00:55:53 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Barry</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://www.reverbnation.com/barrywilliams/song/34842638-ability-to-dance" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.reverbnation.com/barrywilliams/song/34842638-ability-to-dance</a></p><p><br /></p><p>Ability To Dance</p><p>© 2025 Barry Williams Lyrics</p><p>Music and vocals AI Blues Band</p><p><br /></p><p>[Intro Music]</p><p>Here’s some wisdom…</p><p>My Daddy dropped on me.</p><p>Live your life like this son…</p><p>And you’ll live your life free.</p><p>(he said)</p><p>Always help your brothers,</p><p>Don’t be scared to take a stand.</p><p>March to your own drummer,</p><p>If it means leaving the band.</p><p>If it feels wrong don’t you do it,</p><p>That’s what it means to be a man....</p><p>[chorus]</p><p>Wake up every morning,</p><p>and thank God for the chance.</p><p>To listen to his music,</p><p>And your ability to dance.</p><p>(whoo)</p><p>[guitar solo]</p><p>Say exactly what you mean</p><p>Always look them in the eye</p><p>Trust what your gut is saying,</p><p>Cause your gut's probly right.</p><p>Don’t give up on your dreams</p><p>And you’ll live a happy life.</p><p>(Whooo Lawd)</p><p>[guitar solo]</p><p>[chorus]</p><p>Wake up every morning</p><p>and thank God for the chance</p><p>To listen to his music</p><p>And your ability to dance</p><p>Now go listen to his music</p><p>and show him how you dance</p><p>[Outro]</p><p><a href="https://www.reverbnation.com/barrywilliams?profile_view_source=header_icon_nav#" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">Close</a></p>]]>
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        <title>Lovin' More Than Me</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1295/lovin-more-than-me</link>
        <pubDate>Mon, 13 Jan 2025 22:06:29 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Barry</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Curtis Campbell sent me this blues track for me to sing over, and this is the result. I had a blast doing this one. It always makes me smile 😊</p><p><a href="https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=8271012" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=8271012</a></p>]]>
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        <title>Sad Faces</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1289/sad-faces</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 12 Jan 2025 18:14:00 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hey, Songsters!  Had to go solo on this one because I didn't want to eliminate the Bridge and couldn't find a Backing Track suitable.  Anyway, I'm imagining I'm Dylan singing these blues; but NOT but what the hey everyone can dream...</p><p>This is a lyric I pretty much wrote while driving my car down the freeway; recording it on notepad on my iphone.  Then, I tweaked the lyric this morning and it turned out to be 12-Bar Blues of which I don't know how to play other than the chord progression.  I guess, you'll have to use your imagination and I appreciate that very much!</p><p>Thank you for listening ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/sad-faces" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/sad-faces</a></p><p><strong>SAD FACES</strong></p><p>Is it just me or is unhappy people all that I see?</p><p>Is it just me or does everyone feel crappy as can be?</p><p>I’m just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway</p><p><br /></p><p>Stop off at the drug store, babies sniffling and coughing, don’t look happy to me</p><p>And it’s mostly cloudy today in the land of milk and money</p><p>And I’m lookin’ hard but I don’t see any kind ‘a leeway</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway</p><p>Just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway</p><p>Oooh-oooh-oooh</p><p><br /></p><p>Call you on the phone you’re all alone, alone just like me</p><p>Ever since the lock-downs things just ain’t the way they used to be</p><p>And I’m searchin’ for the right words to say but there’s no leeway</p><p> </p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>And it breaks my heart, tears my guts apart</p><p>Yes, it breaks my heart, tears my guts apart</p><p>How far, how far we have fallen</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway</p><p>Just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway</p><p>Oooh-oooh-oooh</p><p> </p><p>Is it just me or is unhappy people all that I see?</p><p>Is it just me or does everyone feel crappy as can be?</p><p>I’m just one of many sad faces driving down the freeway, oooh-oooh</p><p><br /></p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Frog In My Throat Blues</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/1283/frog-in-my-throat-blues</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 11 Jan 2025 16:58:02 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>HummerWisdom</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Seriously, have had this frog in my throat for about 2 weeks.  Seems to be nothing serious but it's pretty annoying clearing my throat.  I can tell you one thing; it AIN'T Covee!  LoL!  Any feedback is appreciated.  </p><p>Backing track by AUsher Tracks, YouTube.  And the end sucks 'cuz the track goes on for a few more minutes of which this ditty doesn't warrant, anyway, thank you for listening ===&gt; <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/frog-in-my-throat-blues" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/frog-in-my-throat-blues</a></p><p><strong>FROG IN MY THROAT BLUES</strong></p><p>Got a frog in my throat</p><p>Got a frog in my throat</p><p>Since my baby’s been gone got a big ol’ frog in my throat</p><p>Like all he ever wrote</p><p> </p><p>There’s a leak in my boat</p><p>There’s a leak in my boat</p><p>Since my baby’s been gone there’s a big ol’ leak in my boat</p><p>I could use a raincoat</p><p> </p><p>There’s a fog in my brain</p><p>There’s a fog in my brain</p><p>Since my baby’s been gone there’s a big ol’ fog in my brain</p><p>Three days nothin’ but rain</p><p> </p><p>Hoo-hoo-oooh-oooh, Hoo-hoo-oooh-oooh</p><p>Hoo-hoo-oooh-oooh, Hoo-hoo-oooh-oooh</p><p><em>Findin’ it hard to keep afloat</em></p><p> </p><p>Got a frog in my throat</p><p>Got a frog in my throat</p><p>Since my baby’s been gone got a big ol’ frog in my throat</p><p>Like all he ever wrote..</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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        <title>Solitary Throne - Blues</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/834/solitary-throne-blues</link>
        <pubDate>Fri, 27 Sep 2024 22:27:01 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>prysmatyk</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>I took to making another song in <strong>Suno</strong> to share my lyrics audibly. It's not as bluesy as I envision it should be but at least the vocals are prominently heard. In my head I hear this raspy baritone slightly off key or strained voice wailing as he seduces the notes from his guitar. A smoky room filled with the scents of alcohol and tobacco hanging in the air, murmuring crowds speaking in hushed tones in the background and the raw emotions of the era. A shanty of sorts where people just did there thing. </p><p>Well enough of my imagination, lets give you my new creation. (<strong>ai's creation</strong> using my lyrics to be accurate)</p><p><a href="https://youtu.be/dA21iyXbBuU" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://youtu.be/dA21iyXbBuU</a></p><p>Solitary Throne </p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>She’s gone forever, no turning back this time,</p><p>Drew the line, now she’s living in my mind.</p><p>Pretend I'm happy, lost in life alone,</p><p>Skeptical of love, on my solitary throne.  </p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Echoes of her memory, with every step I take,</p><p>Tears keep falling down, it’s hard not to hesitate.</p><p>My fragile heart now torn, her memory still held dear.</p><p>Now fallin' in love again is what I fear.</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>She used to sleep so softly on a pillow made of silk,</p><p>Hair untamed and free, complexion white as milk.</p><p>Longing for her laughter, craving for her smile,</p><p>But she’s gone forever, can't go on another mile.  </p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Echoes of her memory, with every step I take,</p><p>Tears keep falling down, it’s hard not to hesitate.</p><p>My fragile heart now torn, her memory still held dear.</p><p>Now fallin' in love again is what I fear.</p><p><br /></p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>In the shadows of the night, I'm cryin' out her name,</p><p>All the love we had, gone and I'm the one to blame.</p><p>Still, I hope she finds what she’s searches for,</p><p>But deep inside I know, my heart's a broken door.  </p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Echoes of her memory, with every step I take,</p><p>Tears keep falling down, it’s hard not to hesitate.</p><p>My fragile heart now torn, her memory still held dear</p><p>Now fallin' in love again is what I fear.</p><p><br /></p><p>[Outro]</p><p>She’s gone forever, but her spirit lingers on,</p><p>In the depths of my heart, her memory’s never gone.</p>]]>
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        <title>Blue Lights</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/123/blue-lights</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 05 Mar 2023 21:29:52 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>CorkingCrackBand</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>A mildly bluesy folk/rock song. I became aware of a story told by a woman who was groomed as a teen and only realised in her 20's what happened to her, after subsequent struggles. She struck me as having immense fortitude and sense of self. The groomer had played the woman's favourite song while taking her virginity/raping her. I turned that admiration into a song, partially for my eldest daughter who, 2 days prior to this Christmas gone, had the experience of trying to be coxed and then pulled into a van. Things are getting back to normal now, but it was a deeply traumatic experience to her.*</p><p>Link: <a href="https://soundcloud.com/lee_boyes-128832399/blue-lights" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">Stream Blue Lights by The Corking Crack Band | Listen online for free on SoundCloud</a></p><p><br /></p><p>You can ignore the silly bits (especially at the end). They're just there as this will be on an album and I'm trying to help keep it from being too dark. Hopefully it'll work in an album context - I do strange albums!</p><p><br /></p><p>Lyric:</p><p><br /></p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>In a room where you didn’t belong.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>He played your favourite song.</p><p><br /></p><p>You asked if he’d be your first love,</p><p>Though he led you of all the way.</p><p>His firm hand pressed on your back, dear,</p><p>Whispering what you should say.</p><p><br /></p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>He played your favourite song.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>Feigned love was quickly gone.</p><p><br /></p><p>And you knew that he had hurt you:</p><p>Beyond pain, beyond right and wrong.</p><p>He stole without thought and never was caught,</p><p>And you’ve held that pain so long.</p><p><br /></p><p>Do you fear that you lost it?</p><p>- That special piece of your soul.</p><p>Is it to hope or regret,</p><p>That in long nights your tears call?</p><p><br /></p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>He played your favourite song.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>It’s not the loss that made you strong:</p><p><br /></p><p>It’s not aching away in the darkness.</p><p>It’s not fearing it might come again.</p><p>It’s not holding yourself in comfort.</p><p>It’s not hoping the pain may still wane.</p><p><br /></p><p>It’s in living each day with the memory.</p><p>It’s the strength to still play that song.</p><p>It’s in shining that light on the monster,</p><p>And telling it you're brave and strong.</p><p><br /></p><p>Your soul it never was stolen,</p><p>It was bruised but it is with you life long.</p><p>You have risen from depths I can’t fathom,</p><p>And you still play that beautiful song .</p><p><br /></p><p>Because beauty, my love, is everlasting;</p><p>It’s grows fierce in the most fertile shit.</p><p>Each smile you bear is a victory,</p><p>Over a man who’s not worth your spit.</p><p><br /></p><p>He may have hurt and scarred you;</p><p>Made marks that will always last,</p><p>But you know he can’t control you,</p><p>From the blue hue of the past.</p><p><br /></p><p>Yes, the strength lies not in anger,</p><p>In pain of things long gone.</p><p>It’s in your Spirit, Heart and Soul,</p><p>Every time you play that song.</p><p><br /></p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>Fading amidst the dawn.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>Flicker as hope is born.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>You play your favourite song.</p><p>Blue lights, blue lights.</p><p>And that’s how I know you’re so strong.</p><p><br /></p><p>Re. the song, I am deeply worried that in my eagerness to cram in the lyric I wanted to, the section between 2-4 minutes winds up monotonous. I really don't want to cull the lyric or add in separating sections that will only extend the already long song. The only option is to move some of that lyric into a bridge/middle 8. I'd be interested in your thoughts on this point in particular. My vocal has nowhere to hide in this song so I hope it's not too painful on the ears! 😃</p><p><br /></p><p>Equally, if anyone finds the lyric tasteless I'd equally be interested. I'd gladly remove it if it feels inappropriate. On that same point, I have read the forum guidelines and this song might well breach them. I feel like the lyric is sensitively handled but I'm only too pleased for it to be removed if it's in violation and I apologise if so. </p><p>  </p><p>CCB</p><p><br /></p><p>*I promise you - most of my songs don't usually involve personal tragedy! 😁</p>]]>
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        <title>One More Way to Get the Blues</title>
        <link>https://thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/index.php?p=/discussion/120/one-more-way-to-get-the-blues</link>
        <pubDate>Wed, 01 Mar 2023 16:07:24 +0000</pubDate>
        <category>Original Songs &amp; Lyrics for review</category>
        <dc:creator>Songbird52</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://www.facebook.com/polly.e.chase/videos/155797710617007" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.facebook.com/polly.e.chase/videos/155797710617007</a></p><p><br /></p><p>I am no strnnger to sorrow, / I lost love a few times in my life,</p><p>But of all the loves that ever let me / +down you get the prize.</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh I thought I had paid all the dues,</p><p>but honey you showed me one more way to lose.</p><p><br /></p><p>Yeah, now I found out one more way to go wrong,</p><p>one more +reason for singin a heartbreak song,</p><p>I thought I'd seen it all by now,</p><p>but darlin, you taught me how to find another way to get the blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>I didn't know I didn't know how bad it could be,</p><p>but honey you showed me, you made me see</p><p>thought I'd cried it all out over the years.</p><p>but I found +out I +still got plenty more tears.</p><p><br /></p><p>Yeah darlin you have been my education / you taught me a new reason to cry,</p><p>another way to get slammed / another way to watch good lovin die,</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh I thought I would never see anything new, / but you taught me somethin that I never knew.</p><p>Now I know what I missed, a new way ta get dissed, /  another way to get the blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>I never knew someone like you, / I never fell so hard somehow,</p><p>but you caught me by surprise / hit me right between the B eyes,</p><p><br /></p><p>B Oh babe you really showed me how, / you taught me Em one more way to Am lose.</p><p>B one more way to get the Em blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>I thought by god this has to be / the kind of love that lasts,</p><p>I thought that I could finally / forget the sorry past.</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh but you +had other plans, / other +places to be,</p><p>other bells to ring, / other friends you had to see,</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh I was the last to get the news, / an' now I found out one more way to lose,</p><p>ah one more way to ruin my day, / one more way to get the blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>Why don't ya just stab me in the heart babe, / jus get it over fast,</p><p>nah you'd rather take it nice an' slow / make sure the hurtin will last</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh yeah, there's always one more reason to lose,</p><p>there's always one more sure fire guaranteed way to get the blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>There's always one more just give a holler</p><p>one more way bet your bottom dollar, somebody's gonna sell ya one more way to lose.</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh yeah somebody's gonna sell ya a brand new way, come on in an' get yours today,</p><p>one more way to get the blues.</p><p><br /></p><p>Ah you can always find, won't take much tryin one more fine way to get the blues.</p>]]>
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