I intended to have spoken word in the shorter two liners but ai has a mind of its own, so I'm lucky they were sung at all. Also suno chose to speak the words at the end but cut off the last two words, so I had to cut the part out and try to fade things together. PITA I now feel for you all making and mixing your own tracks. This also was the first time the ai kept the lyrics in order as I had them. A big deal! Also, third verse post generation from suno, I realized the word fear should have replaces the word hear as it fits thematically better to the verse and piece.

I added in the horse sounds as I thought it would be a good effect for the ambiance of the piece but without the narrated parts for effect and maybe a deeper sound I feel it falls flat to where it could be brought.

Overall I am pleased with the lyrics and feel it comprises what you all suggested to improve upon. Let me know what you think?

Audio here: https://youtu.be/m3F4WlquqKM

The Riders Reign

Spoken verse-

When the horsemen ride on their steeds,

It's time to pay for our misdeeds!

Rider comes on his steed of white,

Bow of steel in hand held true.

Years of peace lost to the night,

His conquests rings in anew.

Spoken verse-

From other worlds riders appear,

the darkened skies above won't clear.

Upon a horse so fiery red,

He gallops forth unleashes war.

The world has never felt such dread,

Not much left worth fighting for.

Spoken verse-

Darkness spreads its ebon pall

The writings written on the wall!

A horse of black, a somber sign,

Scales held firm, his judgments clear.

As hunger grows, we're losin' time.

Judgement whispers what we hear.

Spoken verse-

Darkness spreads its ebon pall.

The writings written on the wall!

With pestilence and war at hand,

A horse so pale rides in as death.

Brings us to a barren land,

Reckons our cost of breath.

Spoken verse-

Darkness spreads its ebon pall.

The writings written on the wall!

Woeful from their shadows' loom,

Our soul now theirs to keep.

With every step, we feel their doom,

In our beds we get no sleep.

Spoken verse-

As shadows linger on beds we made,

The shroud of night, pulls down our shade.

The riders came and sowed their wrath,

If you're here,

Your soul God passed.