White arrows
https://on.soundcloud.com/Qo1rs3aamk2w4Roi3z
[Verse 1]
Drawing faces in the sand
ocean running faster than workers' wages
beginning is right here but ending comes first
save all the memories on a cloud
[Verse 2]
knocking on the door, nobody answer
once it was busy now all dusty and empty
Wind whispering songs through the window
the most beautiful house in the city
[Chorus]
If you know, you know
loneliness guides dreamers on the road
If you know, you know
loneliness guides dreamers on the road
[Verse 3]
body feels better when heart beats slow
beach looks sad when weather gets cold
cool white lines painted on the road
Bright white arrows show the route
[Verse 4]
sun is up but it feels cold
drove in the morning faster than a thought
Eyes closed, couldn’t see the gold
Got empty hands, trading love for coins
[Chorus]
If you know, you know
loneliness guides dreamers on the road
If you know, you know
loneliness guides dreamers on the road
Comments
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A bit abstract but nevertheless I loved it.
well done.
Sid
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Sounds like a lot of 2000s moody American releases. Don't mean that as an insult, it sounds as good as them. There's a lot of AI generated stuff on this site, so if this is entirely created by humans you should be proud of it and publicise it. Is it you singing, and what instruments are you playing? There is a very abrupt cut off to the end of this.
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Half the songs of the 70ties were abstract . Suno did a good job as as always . I'm still confused on Stairway To Heaven
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Love the chorus!
I also like the poetic nature of the lines in the verses, but collectively they're not saying much to me. But they do have an atmosphere though. V3&4 seem a bit more cohesive in that they seem to be about travelling and that ties to the chorus.
And the music seems a good fit to the lyric.
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Thanks, Sid!
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Thanks!
My lyrics, but AI singing, unfortunately
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Thanks, Rainy!
V1&V2 i tried to show about leaving your place, memories left behind, loneliness. That’s exactly the feedback I was looking for, to see if you could understand what I was trying to show.
The song is about leaving to follow your dream, leaving everything behind, the loneliness you face along the way but still keeping going
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