Original song - Nine, ten, you're going to win!
This is the last one for awhile. I used the normalize and compression functions as best I could figure out on this one as recommended but I don't know if it sounds any better. How does it sound? Lyrically, t's a positive, inspirational, psychological "thought piece".
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/nine-ten-youre-going-to-win
Lyrics
I forgot my name
Did I get the fame?
Is it raining again?
People looking at me
I can see
It's because I'm free
One
Two
Three
Four
You want more
Five
Six
Seven
Eight
You're really great
Nine
Ten
You're going to win!
I forgot my name
Did I get the fame?
Is it raining again?
People looking at me
I can see
It's because I'm free
One
Two
Three
Four
You want more
Five
Six
Seven
Eight
You're really great
Nine
Ten
You're going to win!
Comments
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Thanks. I think though because I did not use distortion on the main guitar parts this may have been a factor, too.
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Congratulations a lot better recording , bravo0
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Definitely a cleaner sound, so kudos on the production. You could even bring the vocals forward a touch, but that's often a personal preference.
The message isn't coming across for me in the lyric, I don't know what it's trying to say. Entirely possible that's just me!
The minor chords etc in the music (which I like) feel like they give it a moody, sad vibe more than a positive, inspirational tone, but certainly thoughtful.
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Thanks for listening and making that point. The minor chord, E minor, to the D Maj4th/2nd in the verses is the bad times. The count up, which is a minor progression, is when you're going up and finally you make it. That is a power progression. But yes, inspiration songs are usually in a major key. Well, music doesn't have any rules.
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That's true!
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