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        <pubDate>Sat, 18 Apr 2026 10:15:02 +0000</pubDate>
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        <title>With the air of a sigh</title>
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        <pubDate>Wed, 10 Sep 2025 13:28:37 +0000</pubDate>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><br /></p><p>Strange title but I loe it, it's like an image, does not it? </p><p><a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmzjOhy8EKo" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmzjOhy8EKo</a></p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p>Which among so many mists</p><p>hides that truth that sometimes screams</p><p>and sometimes only breathes?</p><p><br /></p><p>What beats in my oblivion</p><p>that turns me into my executioner</p><p>without knowing what my fault is?</p><p><br /></p><p>Everything is ink that fades</p><p>under the water of a tear</p><p><br /></p><p>the portrait of a yesterday </p><p>that is still here</p><p>despite being gone</p><p><br /></p><p>What good are my dreams</p><p>if there are no skiess to place them in?</p><p>What good are my hands</p><p>if there is only air to hold on to?</p><p>What it's for?</p><p><br /></p><p>They are words that went away</p><p><strong>with the air of a sigh</strong></p><p>and even if I look into my guts</p><p>I will find nothing clear</p><p>when life and its traps</p><p>turn off the light of the soul</p>]]>
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        <title>Taken Away</title>
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        <pubDate>Sat, 24 May 2025 16:57:23 +0000</pubDate>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Hello TSFers!  Sorry, a real tearjerker 😥 today.  But I've been wanting and trying to write something that made sense for my birth-mother for a VERY long time now.  Any feedback is welcome.  Interesting Backing Track by Reinhold Tracks <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ruAZs0ESIgI&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=107" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ruAZs0ESIgI&amp;list=PLL71z7YZH8Fi6b6q8fM_yhCG1zwtURT53&amp;index=107</a></p><p>===&gt; For a listen <a href="https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/taken-away" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/taken-away</a></p><p><br /></p><p>TAKEN AWAY</p><p>V1</p><p>The greatest loss I’ve suffered</p><p>Is the loss of my mother</p><p>It would’ve been easier if she’d passed away</p><p>‘Cuz the state took me and my brother</p><p>As babies from our mother</p><p>And it’s hard finding the right words to say</p><p> </p><p>[Climb]</p><p>Mother fought so hard; she fought so hard to keep us</p><p>It must’ve shattered her heart into a million pieces</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>V2</p><p>In a thousand-some places</p><p>In a thousand-some faces</p><p>I searched for someone who remotely looked like me</p><p>By the time I found Mother</p><p>She was six-feet under</p><p>But at least I knew, then and there, she was finally free</p><p> </p><p>[Climb]</p><p>Mother fought so hard; she fought so hard to keep us</p><p>It must’ve shattered her heart into a million pieces</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>V3</p><p>Now, in Maplewood Cemetery</p><p>Next to that lovely willow tree</p><p>May you rest in peace, Mother ‘til one day I get there</p><p>And when I see you in Paradise</p><p>No time will we sacrifice</p><p>We’ll have eternity to share and I will forever be:</p><p> </p><p>Taken away, taken away</p><p>Taken away, taken away</p><p> </p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>There are no words to say</p><p>Taken away</p><p>Taken away</p><p>I can’t get over it to this day</p><p> </p><p>© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved</p>]]>
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