Time for no man
Got the idea from watching a YouTube video about "what creates time"
Lyrics by me. Music / Vocals - Suno
https://suno.com/song/5c8fb24a-fa5e-4a54-8d2d-ca6efa610721
[Verse 1]
Tickety tock chimes clocks suspended from walls
Red and blue pills I'm large then very small
Receding in the ebbs and flows of night's tide
On white Unicorns of golden wishful dreams ride
[Verse 2]
Into brilliant kaleidoscope of gaseous spaces
Melting swirling black hands off white cold faces
Suspending movement of matter voids in spacetime
My soulless and the vast emptiness of time combine
[Chorus]
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
I can relate, never too late, (no debate)
[Verse 3]
From the bleakness sands in fingers fall
Into rocking cradles then pendulums call
Holding out my glorious mind for all to see
This mystical magical realm of my reality
[Verse 4]
Prancing through densely rosy fielded sea
Time seemingly endless always running free
Orangey Yellowy tints turning shades of blues
Into sorrowful black and greyed nightly hues
[Chorus]
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
Time for no man waits, (I can relate)
I can relate, never too late, (no debate)
[Bridge]
A voiceless voice amongst a crowd of one
Painful questions return responses none
If determinism not predetermined, then why
Theologically logically turns blinded eyes
[Outro]
Putting pen to paper as the season change time
As words and meanings are lost to the rhyme
Mist to clouds and clouds return misty again
Resolution and peace comes closure at the end
Comments
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This is one of those songs were you don't have to understand to enjoy the experience, kinda like "whiter shade of pale".
Enjoyed the journey, well done.
Sid
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@sidshovel - thanks.. the last line I wasn't sure if I should put in the end or at the end.. I think at the end, leaves things more open to interpretation. what do you think?
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Apart from the interpretation aspect, the terms resolution and closure naturally fit more comfortably at the end.
This is a nice one Bill, really did enjoy it, thanks.
Sid
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@sidshovel - I agree.. at, leaves it to how people interpret it to mean.. thanks for the comments,
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I like the chorus in this. I haven't seen you use repetition like that before, but it works here. And I think it makes it very accessible to people in a more general way. Could easily be a song that people enjoy, but can only remember the words to the chorus.
I like the ethereal voice and music at the start too, seems very fitting.
Enjoyed my listen.
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You're quiet the poet my man
Yes that repetition works in this song , pop do that a lot
very pretty man , I enjoyed this
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@RainyDayMan - Well.. the chorus was actually supposed to be just "time", repeated then I remembered the song time has come today by the chambers brothers, so I changed it.. thanks for the comment.
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Wow! Another impressive AI offering. I gotta salute you guys. I LOVE this stuff. It's opening a whole new door to creativity.
I really want to look into this further. This is soooooo good! I want to hear more!
I really don't care what the lyrical context is. I just love wrapping my ears around it.
😀John B
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Poetry in Motion, again @bhengen I wouldn't know where to begin. You are a most imaginative being for certain. Now, for that magical and mystical listen. Dreamy and I love the photo SUNO decided on!
Your devoted fan,
Renee 💌
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@HummerWisdom - Thanks Renee.. it's is amusing what Suno comes up with picture for the songs..
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Yes, I do understand that the song is yours. It's cool that you were able to do this with your words and music. Very impressive.
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