LOVE WITHOUT MEASURE

I wrote the first two verses to this a little over a year ago. I got stuck on the third verse, So I sent it to a friend, Jim Rogers who lives on Northern Ky. Just south the Ohio river from Cincinatti. The next morning it was in my inbox.
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It's in the eyes of a child
the wagging tail of a pup
it's a hand reaching out
to help some poor soul up
it's a visit from an old friend
when you're down and alone
It's a family waiting for
their soldier coming home
chorus
I can feel it in the air
over here, over there
here's to those who wear
their hearts upon their sleeves
for there is no greater treasure
than love without measure
such a blessing and a pleasure
to give and receive
It was the smell of mother's kitchen
how I loved the holidays
It's how my father worshipped her
'til the day he passed away
so, take it all in, toss it around
it's abundant and it's free
I'll throw all my love at you
you can throw yours back at me
repeat chorus
As life goes on
as the years roll by
and the seasons change
in the blink of an eye
love will be there
like it's always been
so, when love comes a knocking
open up and let it in
repeat chorus
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cool lyrics. very profound
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Man, I love this, the lyrics are amazing the way they state the obvious things that are easy to miss when you don't take the time to look.
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Second song of yours I've heard tonight. What a great voice, and fabulous lyrics. Some really nice intrumentation too. The key change worked well. A great track.😀
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Nice! My favourite lines are:
for there is no greater treasure
than love without measure
Simple and effective.
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What a fabulous song, well written capturing the essence of what love is all about.
The laid back vocals were ideal for the message.
Loved it, well done.
Sid
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@ Owen Thanks Owen My favorite is in the 2nd verse about my mom and pop. Mother would spend two days cooking before Thanksgiving and Christmas until she got sick. I don't recall my dad ever saying he loved me. I also don't recall him ever missing a single one of my baseball and football games and he would boast about me to his friends. Actions speak louder than words, I suppose.
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Yes, and actions carry more weight!
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Strong lyric. Kudos. I'm not crazy abut the music or the singing. But, at least they're real, and I do appreciate that. It gets a little tiresome clicking on things here just to discover another AI waste of my time. :)
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@ChrisPrice Thanks very much Chris and good ear on the key change! It's kind of subtle and quick. You're the first to mention it.
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@HoboSage Thanks for listening and your honest opinion. I'm pleased you like the lyrics. My vocals and music are what they are and ain't what they ain't I suppose. Some like 'em and some don't. I just listened and left a comment on your song "Spring". Really nice! looking forward to hearing more from you. Thanks again!
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