The french Privateer - Lyrics

Here is another maritime themed Song. For this one, I don't have the melody down yet. I imagine something like "the wellermen", or some of the songs by "The Longest Johns" or "The Ballina Whalers", definitely for several voices. Maybe someone has an idea for me and likes to collaborate...
The french Privateer
by sporty
Rouse up, rouse up, to quarters we beat,
get up you boys from your lousy sleep
The watchman up in the lookout high
he spotted the French, but we shall not die
The fog has hidden her sails from our sight
But the eyes and good scope of the man in the height
He saw her hull with her cannons in load
Make sure that our weapons are first to explode
(Refrain)
haul away, haul away this mighty ship
Let’s not make this her final trip
take the helm, take the helm and begin to steer
cause we will bring down this French privateer
All stations be manned to rain fire and lead
Bring her alongside, our blood may be shed
But brave will we be and fear we will not
As long as our ship will have the last shot
Now run up our colors, stand tall on the deck
We’ll keep on shooting until she's a wreck
but don't shoot too hasty, she’s not close at range
we’ll warm up our cannons if this is to change
(Refrain)
Hold steady now lads, courage to be shown
We will target her midship until it is blown
Bring the wounded aside, make sure they get help
fill our holes with Oakum and maybe with kelp
Now this ship by far is the best you will serve
And we will be lucky if you have the nerve
Let our galleon figure by our shining star
for this brave big o’l Man-o-war
(Refrain)
Our banner flies high, our Cannons aim low
We’ll bring down hell to her from stern to bow
With God and faith and King George on our side
We’ll soon board this ship and turn the tide
with cadence and rhythm and fine gunnery
We’ll take her down, wherever she’ll be
We’ll fire a broadside, again and again
tomorrow this time we’ll drink French champagne
(Refrain)
Comments
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Hi @StefPo ,
A very patriotic set of lyrics, and I can appreciate the military value in this song.
I can imagine a motivating and high spirit march going on.
Thanks for this inspiring words.
Rene
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Ja, something like a march was in my mind too. Accompanied by a snare drum, 3 or 4 voices singing rather fast than slow. Typical instruments of that time, wish i could play them all...:-)
This is exiting...I'll try to put this together...thx Rene
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Very good. Great stirring tale, and should fit the style you described very well indeed.
Just a couple of thoughts for you to consider or dismiss
"... this mighty ship" I wonder if "... O mighty ship" might work there, especially when sung
"Let’s not make this her final trip" that line feels short compared to the rest (though it's always dangerous to make such statements without hearing it first). But you might consider something like: "Haul away boys or it's our final trip"
I like that you have "French Privateer" as the final words of the Refrain/Chorus. It carries the most weight, and will help people remember the title.
It's a good lyric!
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Ja, you are right, I'll change that. I really like "O mighty ship!
And i changed the final trip-line into "haul away me boys or it’s our final trip.
This makes the whole refrain sound better. thx for the input, Owen...:-)
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