Released a new song today "There Was a Boy"

Hi you all. Thank you for taking time to listen to my other songs which I've posted in the group, highly appreciated and it's nice to read your comments.
I've released a new song today, I think it's one of my cutest songs, I see this song has a lot of innocence in it. Enjoy listening, Haim.
https://listen.haimshim.com/therewasaboy
Lyrics (taken from my website haimshim.com):
There was a boy he liked this girl so much
He bought her some roses, make up, jeans and such
He kneeled on his knees as she was passing by
Until he found you
You helped him to walked through the dark
Wo.. Wo.. Wo..
There was a cruel girl dressed in such a style
She made him a fool, he thought she’s worth the while
Oh what a loser everybody cried
Until he found you
You helped him to walk through the dark
Wo.. Wo.. Wo..
You walked around you had a lovely plan
You wanted to turn this precious boy into your man
But he was so beaten broken sad and torn
Until he found you
You helped him to walk through the dark
Wo.. Wo.. Wo..
It’s late in the night the moon is in the sky
I am with you I’ll hold you when you cry
And all of the evil it will fade away
Because I found you
Together we walk through the dark
Wo.. Wo.. Wo..
Comments
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I'm not really a fan of this one. It had to happen some time! I think musically it's strong, and your performance is always top-notch, but lyrically it feels pretty light on to me. It's not really saying anything, or at least it's not speaking to me.
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Nice production, but I have to agree with Owen about the lyric. It's a bit bland and gives the impression of having been thrown together without a whole lot of thought with phrases like, "He kneeled on his knees."
I like the melody, but it seems to build nicely to a chorus which never arrives.
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I am enjoying the melody, and the beat is nice.
I am looking for a shift, or a refrain.
Your vocals is very nice, and the lyrics I can understand!
Well done!
Rene
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I love this song. I can imagine it being a real crowd pleaser at a gig. It has a real sing-along vibe and I like the lyric too. We all hear things differently I guess, but I'd keep this song just as it is.
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I disagree with Chris. What this lacks in substance, you make up with your great vocal. Sir you can sing very well.
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