Feelings
I've been away for a long time and I really don't know why... but here I am again so irregular as always!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNlgEfLy_BI&t=81s
Feelings
so dense so dense
that far from being left behind
carried by the hand of time
they get tangled
in my hair
and become forest of sobs
wrapping me
in its tragedy
Feelings feelings
so dense so dense
that they seem knives and ropes
to hurt me and tie my dreams
Jungle
that drowns me
with invisible vines
and the smell
of what is dead
I don't know if I go or come
when I move forward
I go back
engulfed
by what is not
despite
what it was
I wonder if I'm alive while I walk
dragging this living pain
that grows and grows
until touching the ground
erasing all trace of my steps
I don't know if I go or come
yes when I move forward I go back
engulfed
for what is not
despite what it was
Comments
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Great to see you back here Mora. Nice to hear your music again too. A trademark Mora/Marcus song. I like particularly like the production here. Really well structured, with some excellent instrumental shifts throughout. And of course your great vocals. A fabulous track. Keep em comin'😀
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba I love the funky vibe and eclectic atmosphere of this track! The music is engaging, the lyrics fit well, and your vocals are cool. The mix and production are crystal clear. I enjoyed listening. The video is excellent too! Nice work!
I look forward to your next track and video, Mora! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Amazing piece you made here. It has such vivid descriptors that make it a fantastic expression to me. The unusual sound to the vocals enhanced its almost hallucinatory metaphors. Excellent combination of music and poetry that dives deep into some powerful emotions with such simplistic wording.
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A Mora classic! You've lost nothing in being away for a while. Great to see you making music again!
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Too eclectic and ethereal for my taste I'm afraid.
I bow to greater interpretations, and leave it at that.
Sid
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Me alegra que te guste!!! Do you know? When I do a song and I send it to Marcus to put in his guitar I am always excited waiting for his guitar playing, he gives to my music a professional color.. But many times I have to redo my arrangement hahaha
Cuídate
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Hola Joseph, here I am, with my "special" accent hahaha Thank you so much, glad you liked it. This one is really tragic hahaha but the chorus softs a bit this color!!!
Your songs?
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Gracias, much appreciated. Sometimes, when I do songs like this one, so dark, I think of a Greek tragedy 😎 I don't know where this dark breathing comes from... My parents told me that I was very "intense" since they were the first to endure my poems.
See you @prysmatyk
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hank you so much, always so elegant commenting. Your music?
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Intensity is passion amplified. Within you and everyone there lays a passion for something. Until that something is realized and embraced, intensity will sit by waiting.
You have not only found it, but embraced it so you can express it.
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I know my music and lyrics are not conventional at all, many people dislike them and my accent is also very "strange",
Thanks for stopping by.
PD😉
As time goes by, life has been broadening my palate, even the bitter things are useful, they prepare you to taste the sweet things.
Well, I don't know why I tell you this phrase, but I like it.
Stay well @sidshovel
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba Many hoped you would return, and we're happy you did! I responded to your question separately so I don't hijack your thread! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba very true about the bitter stuff being useful to us. Wisdom doesn't come cheap!
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I really appreciate your re-welcome, Joseph
We all come and go carried by the wind of life, we all change without changing, something incredible but true hahaha and we are still young but inside a shell that has lost its elasticity and, whether we like it or not, we become shipwrecked within ourselves in a certain way. @icystorm
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba wrote: "...we all change without changing...".
Well said! There is a line with similar sentiments in a song titled "Secrets" written by the Gibbs and recorded by Elaine Paige around 1981. The line is "changing but always the same". Amazing how so many have similar thoughts!
Cheers,
Joseph
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I think we are all similar but at different times
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I'm sorry, I was wrong..
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