We've Lost the World
https://jgkojak.bandcamp.com/track/weve-lost-the-world
WE'VE LOST THE WORLD
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
Listen now out here I'm out of my mind
I had the signal but now it's lost in time
The static in the waves was sending a sign
Now you can't come back you can't leave it behind
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
I'm a traveler from a faraway star
listening to radio alone in my car
Its lost in the sun Its too far away
I can't hear a thing I've only been gone for a day
Been gone so long into the twilight dream
Where we once lay by a clear mountain stream
I am part of the airwave I am a part of the sky
The signal faded away the night you said goodbye
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
Oh no looks like we've
Lost the world
I can't hear you now the broadcast is through
if you want to find me I'm in the digital queue
Comments
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Vocal is a little far back in the mix for me.
I'm not sure quite sure what this one is saying, though that might be just me!
I do like the chorus, I think that's catchy.
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I can relate to the lyrics and feel similarly about being a stranger in a strange place and feeling disoriented. I like the structure and the overall feeling. I agree with RDM that the vocals could be more forward. Thanks for posting!
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I'm afraid this one's way over my head!
I'll leave it for better minds to comment further.
Thanks for posting
Sid
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Yes, I agree with others that the vocal needs to come forward. I can tell where you're trying to go with this song, but it's a bit jumbled at the minute. Bringing the vocal up would help think.😀
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@jgkojak2 I think you have the beginnings of a good song. As others mentioned, bring forward the vocals, and also increase the volume and add some overdubs and reverb.
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