Obvious (Original song)
https://www.mixcloud.com/mr_octopus/obvious
Lyrics:
I've been thinking about you
When are you gonna leave me too?
Or should that be obvious?
I've got nothing to run to
When are you gonna leave me too?
Or should that be obvious?
I'm floating in a fishbowl
Floundering weak and lazily
Plastic castle turning green
And every day I'm wishful that I'll escape
And find the sea
That you swim in so bravely
Needing to believe
Finding out I'm on my own
Pouring out of me
All these tears of mine
I don't know who to talk to
All of it starts to sound the same
A little too obvious
I keep trying to push through
Scrubbing and scrubbing at the stain
But still it's so obvious
I'm floating in a fishbowl
Hurtling through the galaxy
With the dust and space debris
You're shrinking in the background
Getting too small for me to see
Moving on and feeling free
Needing to believe
Finding out I'm on my own
Pouring out of me
All these tears of mine
Needing to believe
Finding out I'm on my own
Pouring out of me
All these tears of mine
Needing to believe
Finding out I'm on my own
Pouring out of me
All these tears of mine
Comments
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Good track! Wonderful voice, there's places where it feels a bit overridden by the accompaniment which is a shame.
I like how you use Obvious more subtly in the lyric.
I've edited your link, as it was going to the Mixcloud main page before.
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Cool track! Catchy blend of strong vocals, music, lyrics, mix, and a modern sound. Nice work.
Cheers,
Joseph
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Really good, comes together well. Love your voice. [Plastic castle turning green] I really like that line, even though I'm not sure what it means ?
[I'm floating in a fishbowl, hurtling through the galaxy
With the dust and space debris ] liked that.
Well produced
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First impression..what a great voice. Some really nice lyrics too which have already been mentioned. Yeah, a modern production and really well done. I'm no expert on the genre so I can't say too much, but it sounds great to me. I'd say it's very commercial.
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This is nice0
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I like your voice. I really like the song's various metaphors. Esp. the Plastic castle turning green!
A couple of vocal rhythm things were the only distraction for me.
I really like your style. This was a great way share something obviously personal in an accessible way.
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