Nonstop Dance
https://on.soundcloud.com/tZN3elyh9iKvZ6M6Jp
[Verse 1]
I got this curse on my whole life
People start to dance once I start to talk
They’ve been dancing and dancing, cannot stop
I can’t even ask if they’re enjoying or not
[Pre-Chorus]
Maria, are you enjoying?
Emi, are you enjoying?
[Chorus]
They just been dancing and dancing nonstop
What’s wrong with me? What’s my problem? Go
[Verse 2]
I went to a doctor, he tried to hold it
It didn’t last long, he started to dance
Call another doctor, call another nurse
They said, “Go get a DJ, go start a band”
[Pre-Chorus]
Doctor, are you enjoying?
Nurse, are you enjoying?
[Chorus]
They just been dancing and dancing nonstop
What’s wrong with me? What’s my problem? Go
[Verse 3]
Yeah, it’s part of my life
I got a DJ, I got a band
Now I can’t stop talking (why?)
I made the whole world dance
[Chorus]
They just been dancing and dancing nonstop
What’s wrong with me? What’s my problem? Go
[Chorus]
They just been dancing and dancing nonstop
What’s wrong with me? What’s my problem? Go
[Chorus]
They just been dancing and dancing nonstop
What’s wrong with me? What’s my problem? Go
Comments
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These are really cool lyrics for Edm.. love the chorus, it's catchy. not sure about the hoedown vibe, but it still works.
A small suggestion is maybe putting Go on its own line in caps with an exclamation point for Suno or Udio to emphasize it. that's the drop. but sounds fine as is.
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Well I think that your lyrics have gotten better, these are good, but I'm not sold with the music you have chosen for them. The music should be more for a square dance type of song, I think yours should be a catchy pop or catchy pop rock sound.
JMO.
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Thanks!
I’m learning how to use FL Studio too. You should try it on your EDM songs it isn’t that hard
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Thanks for you feedback, Tex! I got what you mean.
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I have Logic Pro, and that's exactly what I'm doing :)
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Naw it don't have to be some country hoe down , This works great , cool up beat song for kids
this is the best song you've done
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Thanks, Nash!
I’ll try to promote this song to see how far it goes
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That's cool
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Country aint all that . You blended them country licks with EDM
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This has a great Sound, TGO. What is an EDM song?
Good lyrics, as well. Were those AI generated? Did you write, record, and upload this for a cover? I can only presume you used Suno or some other.
Awesome stuff!
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EDM is Electronic Dance Music - been around since the mid 80's
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It stands for Extra Dance Machine . Usually Exctasy is involved , unless you're 40 years old making a fool out of yourself trying to be 22 . If your doing the Twist by Chubby Checker , its a sure indication your 40 , and should leave quickly . Looking like John Travolta will not help you . in disco fever or whatever he played in 1796 . If you hear a hee haw don't be alarmed it does have some hick licks in it
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