Ego

It's so hard sometimes not to judge people..
For what they believe or what they don't..
I try to be open minded and forgiving..
But I find it hard to get over my ego
It's so big and emotional..
And it constantly bumps heads..
with other egos.. like bumper cars...
(work in progress)
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Your idea is interesting and conscious, I hope to see how this story ends
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Change to “Let Go My Ego.” It will be a very memorable title at least for some of us who are a bit older. Like the old waffle commercial. Just a thought.0
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I think you've got the concept for the song sorted, but it needs to condense into some specific phrases or a hook. Perhaps look for a metaphor about ego, or some sort of expression: my ego so tall I can't climb that wall, ok that's not brilliant but you get the drift. Then you can build a scene around that.
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thanks rainydayman.. idk what happened to my old account but i had to make a new one. i think the website format changed?
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thanks.. that's my intention.. it's good to see someone else who's also in touch with themselves in a conscious way..
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Yes, unfortunately the whole website had to be replaced from scratch, so we all had to make new accounts, including me!
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