Escaping from horizons full of mistakes
Since I was little I loved to read, I read my parents' books hidden in the bathroom and at school I got the first prizes not for knowledge but for the prizes that consisted of lots of wonderful books, stories, thoughts, essays, everything was great. for my eyes!!! I would have been between 7 and 8 years old when I wrote my first story in a small notebook with squared sheets. My life clung to words, thus creating a world to my measure.
I spent a lot of time alone, my parents traveled a lot and depending on the time, (school or vacation) I stayed at home with the nanny or in a residence...
I don't know why I'm telling you this but... this song has made me remember an adventure I wrote about a ship that was alive and fell in love with the moon and instead of sailing it wanted to fly hahaha So here is this song that doesn't have nothing to see but it does have a boat!!
(Sorry for my accent)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RF7gmO9vlI8
I am a boat
that has to scape
from horizons
full of mistakes
from horizons
full of mistakes
I am a paper
I am a pencil
I am the void
I am the feeler
filling my ink
I am the feeler
filling my ink
I am a boat
looking for seas
that cut the distance
from unnamed stars x2
I am
my time
I am
a moment
for Universe x2
But then
what will I be
where will they go
my dreams
my words
my thoughts,
my essence x2
I am a boat
that has to scape
from horizons
full of mistakes
from horizons
full of mistakes
I am a paper
I am a pencil
I am the voidddddd
I am the feeler
filling my ink
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba Your new song has a nice vibe and it flows well. Your lyrics are intriguing and your vocals are great as usual! The production sound quality is crystal clear. Your video is cool, too! I enjoyed watching and listening. Nice work! I also liked reading your story about your enjoyment of reading and writing when you were a child, and your tale of the ship that fell in love with the moon! Amusing! 😎
Regarding your lyrics, I think my favorite lines are:
But then what will I be where will they go my dreams my words my thoughts, my essence
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I want you're childhood Mora
Very progressive track , each song gets better
I also know what I'm talking about , I had a perfect childhood , Graduated for Julliard at 17 years old , On a whim bought lottery ticket , I won 2 billion , So I'm a expert on all facets of life
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I love the vocal effects and those pitched synths. The soundscape on this one is marvellous and the synths really steal the show - though I suspect 1 of them is a synth'd up guitar?
A lovely flow to this. It weaves with the vocals and instruments bouncing off of each other very effectively. The lyrics are intriguing and evocative I feel of a certain world and certainty we create in isolation. A oneness with our existence and it's contents.
Great work,
CCB
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Hola chico! Gracias, This song has a very special meaning to me. Stay well. I appreciate very much your so nice and extended comment. 😊
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No sé...Many times your caustic sense of humor leaves me perplexed, I don't know when you are serious or not, although it doesn't matter, it would sound the same either way hahaha
I can't complain about my childhood, I am the way I am thanks to it. When my parents traveled I could enjoy like a dog with the dogs in the house and feel accompanied by a ghost that at night would go by my side to my room and disappear at the door...
But, during one of those trips, a relative came to keep me company... and he was "too affectionate", you understand me?
Would the dogs help me? Ghost? the babysitter who didn't know anything because she was always on the phone?
Stay well rich or poor!!
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Another great track Mora. I don't usually like autotune type fx but it works really well on this track. I love the video to this one too. Great stuff.😀
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I love the way the song flows along. It's has such a nice feel. Intriguing lyrics that make me think. I love that! Excellent all around.
I enjoyed your liner notes. I'm so impressed that you wrote a story at 7 or 8. The story about the moon is super creative. The idea that it wants to fly instead of sail is awesome.
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Hola Chris!!! Muchas gracias!! Always so kind supporting my songs!! @ChrisPrice
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hahah Yes, I love writing!! I wrote a lot of things, good, bad, funny, sad... My father was a journalist and my mother a lover of reading so the house was plenty of books of many styles, forbidden ones were my favorites hahaha
Thank you very much @Andrea your way of doing in the forum is soooooo coooooool!!! Much appreciated.
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this might be my favorite song of yours.
"i am the feeler filling my ink" is such a cool line
i agree with chris that the autotune really works here and the video is really good. this one seemed a bit more personal. buen trabajo!
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It's an old song... it was one of my favorites too, now... I don't have any facvourtie hahaha maybe summer does to help to e optimist, almost here... Thank you very much for counting, much appreciated.
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Hi M....this is awesome. I can hear this playing in a high society party atmosphere. Very in vogue.
I love the sound of this!!!
One of your very best!!
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Olé!!! Muchacho, me has arreglado la tarde!!! lol
You made my afternoon! Thank you @IronKnee
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