Cain - Remix
Words me; music - suno
reworked an existing song
https://suno.com/s/XqLNueXEOHRZA1Jb
[Intro - Spoken word]
Barren soil turns red
Cain, what have you done?
My son, my son, my son
[Verse 1]
Bloody Able at thine feet
Lays still like the night
Jealous rock, angered hands
What is wrong is never right
[Verse 2]
On somber knees
You plead for kindness
You know not your actions
Now you beg forgiveness
[Pre-chorus]
You know not what you've done
[Chorus]
In your soul, the sadness
In your mind, the madness
In your heart, true hate
Spiteful act, sealed fate
[Bridge]
Sad eyes tears falling
softly weeps upon your feet
Your mind was not your own,
Remorseful your heart beats
[Pre-chorus - Cain]
You now not what you've done
[Chorus]
In your soul, the sadness
In your mind, the madness
In your heart, true hate
Spiteful act, sealed fate
[Outro - God]
For this act, I declare
Your soul now never free
This mark eternally worn
Forever cast, your sworn
Comments
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Yup the first murder and condemned by God for killing Able
Sounds good Bill , A little different for you . Pretty dramatic man .
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Thanks Elvis, trying different things
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Good one! Enjoyed the read and the song.0
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Thanks carroll :)
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his family died in Noahs ark flood of earth , so he was cursed to the end , Then supposedly, life started back up from Noahs humans on that boat . thats a tuff one to swallow .
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The bible is full of good stories, get out of it what you want :)..
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I think Suno is taking on a very particular character hahah
Qué cosas!
I like the lyrics, it works well, it makes me remember so many things we've been made to believe since we were little and that, seen from the distance brought by the harshness of life, reveal themselves as fairy tales, ogres, and Martians.
Me lo he pasado muy bien @bhengen
I see that you continue to delve deeper into your mine.
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Thanks mora, your actually my inspiration of using less to say more. I like this version better than the original.
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