Rivers Between Us

subvibe · October 16

Hi

done a new song Its in a melodic EDM style

Thanks for taking the time to Listen

subvibe

ElvisNash · October 16

Not one of your best ones , But still good , Drum machines kinda drive me nuts

Good job , You should use a pic , kind hard relating to a white thing with crooked eyes

ElvisNash · October 16

ha ha ha there ya go

Hardtwistmusic · October 17

I left you a comment on Soundcloud.

RainyDayMan · October 17

Would you mind posting the lyrics here on TSF along with the link to your songs?

I understand that lyrics may be secondary for some EDM songs but it does make it easier to comment on them.

Vocals seem a bit muddy in the mix to me.

The ending felt a bit weak. The fade out seemed to come out of nowhere. It stopped rather than ended.

This one didn't really grab me.

subvibe · October 17

i agree its not one of my best , but i keep trying something different

We used to dance

In the pouring rain

Now we just stare

At each other through a windowpane

I reach out

But youre a current I cant hold

Youre so warm

But now youre eyes are cold

The rivers between us

Keep pulling me down

Drowning in the silence

Cant hear a sound

But youre on the shore

Im lost in the flood

Still calling your name

Through the water and mud

The rivers between us

You float through dreams

But youre out of reach

Like a tide that just wont return

To the beach

subvibe

jgkojak · 2:57AM

I like this and it has a lot of potential - this mix is way too hot -

you should probably cut the levels on everything in half then adjust from there

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