Your Invitation Is Declined
Something a little different.
Listen at my website. Sounds better there, I think: Your Invitation Is Declined – Gavin and the Mysterious Beings
Or listen at SoundCloud: https://on.soundcloud.com/LdktANckDywgRUIWsU
YOUR INVITATION IS DECLINED
(Words & Music by Gavin Sinclair)
So here you are again, hello my old friend
Of course, I knew that you'd be back some day
But I just never knew that it would be so soon
Or how long you'd want to stay
You look different this time somehow
A harder glint in your eye
Beneath the shadow of your furrowed brow
You whisper, "Why even try?"
And no, I won't go home with you (Come with me, Gavin)
At least not this time (It’s time)
I'll pull through, like I always do
Your invitation is declined
First time I saw you there, you caught me unawares
Thought that I was one that you had missed
Never thought to see your face, feel the freeze of your embrace
You surprised me with your kiss
A soft suggestion to follow you down
A dark and dusty stair
Raised my eyes from the ground, took a long look around
But I made it out of there
And no, I won't go home with you (I can wait)
At least not this time (Next time)
I'll pull through, like I always do
Your invitation is declined
Maybe one day, something in your voice
Will lead me to a different choice
Maybe...
But for now...
I won't go home with you (You’ll change your mind)
At least not this time (I’ll be there when you do)
I'll pull through, like I always do
Your invitation is declined
Comments
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Excellent Gavin, thoroughly enjoyable piece.
As in most cases, your anecdotes set the scenery and ambience to bury yourself in the song, appreciate that.
Very good structure and rhyming schemes, learn a lot from them.
Read the Grim Reaper in this but there is enough scope for a few ways to go with it.
Simple theme, but they are the hardest and the best when they come off, as this is.
Thanks for sharing, look forward to the next,
Regards to the guys,
Sid
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@OnlyGavin - Real catchy tune. reads to me like somebody is having an existential crisis 😁
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Could be death, but I'm leaning towards depression based on the "Why even try?" line.
I like how you've set this as a seduction, there's power in that. And that you have to keep choosing the positive.
A light song with a deeper meaning.
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@sidshovel @bhengen @RainyDayMan You are all right. I wrote it about the temptation to give in to depression, but it could be interpreted as Sid suggests.
Thanks for listening and commenting.
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As usual, puts a smile on my face. gotta love what you do.
keep having fun. It's been a pleasure.
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