Alot of Life to Live

Domd
New Jersey
Wonder if I could do the 90 so ngs in 90 days challenge. I think Ive done 30/30
If that's not Rod Stewart singing I don't know...
My lyrics into Ai
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15031942
Cmon buddy just answer me
I know what you've been through
the world's in need a brand new hero
my money's still on you
Spend a little of that no quit
saved up since we were kids
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
Somewhere on this adventure
the GPS got lost
the prophets lied about too little profit
you didnt make back cost
but there's no tell in your poker face
it's time for a bid
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
One word could mean everything
like the moon in the dark
aint no doubt in my dubious mind
you'll hit one out of the park
all I ask is to hear from you
we'll get this whole thing fixed
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
Not to mention inventin things
good intentions and wedding rings
comprehension of everything
you've got alot of life to live
If that's not Rod Stewart singing I don't know...
My lyrics into Ai
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15031942
Cmon buddy just answer me
I know what you've been through
the world's in need a brand new hero
my money's still on you
Spend a little of that no quit
saved up since we were kids
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
Somewhere on this adventure
the GPS got lost
the prophets lied about too little profit
you didnt make back cost
but there's no tell in your poker face
it's time for a bid
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
One word could mean everything
like the moon in the dark
aint no doubt in my dubious mind
you'll hit one out of the park
all I ask is to hear from you
we'll get this whole thing fixed
Breakin records and breakin hearts
precious seconds and second starts
makin messes and makin art
you've got alot of life to live
Not to mention inventin things
good intentions and wedding rings
comprehension of everything
you've got alot of life to live
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"Breakin records and breakin hearts" is a strong start to the chorus. Lots of energy there.
And yes, it really does sound like Rod Stewart, though I'm not sure that's a good thing. Artists should probably have control over where their voice is being used.
Not sure it's a got a killer memorable hook, but it's a very solid pop track.
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Thanks, wouldn't release this with rod singing, but it was nice of him to offer ..
Think I may add a spicier hook, just need one line0
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